Across the universe

by Xx soul sorrow xX

The Shove

Fluttershy was bullied at Canterlot High a lot.... Today that is what was happening. She was asking people to join her animal club to study animals but a kid who was purple named Horace Horseshoe was making fun of her. Horace was evil and hated animals and even stepped on his cat. He called Fluttershy an Idiot Animal Girl, or IAG for short.
The other five friends of hers ran over to where they were fighting. They went to the statue in the front where the portal was.
" FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT" kids were creaming.
Horace shoved Fluttershy into the statue and she fell into the portal. All the kids gasp and went quiet. The friends ran to the portal crying. Twilight was crying the hardest.
One by one they jump in after her, but something wasn't right. Something didn't feeel right. When they jump in, the portal twist 'em around not naturally. They were going the wrong way! They were going through a wormhole!!!

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[Strawberry Surprise]

Fluttershy was bullied at Canterlot High a lot.... Today that is what was happening.

I never would have known that if it was worded any other way. That's sarcasm by the way.

Horace was evil and hated animals and even stepped on his cat.

Sounds like a serial killer in the making.

He called Fluttershy an Idiot Animal Girl, or IAG for short.

Cutting wit there. That's more sarcasm.

Horace shoved Fluttershy into the statue and she fell into the portal. All the kids gasp and went quiet. The friends ran to the portal crying. Twilight was crying the hardest.

You cannot begin to understand how funny that image is. All of Fluttershy's friends running to a the portal crying all of a sudden? How emotionally unbalanced are these people?

One by one they jump in after her, but something wasn't right. Something didn't feeel right. When they jump in, the portal twist 'em around not naturally. They were going the wrong way! They were going through a wormhole!!!

I see this story has used the less common 'not naturally,' instead of the generally accepted 'unnaturally.' A fine example of how unintentionally funny this story can be.