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love it xD
ok, is this anthro or what? its not tagged as such which would mean that its not, yet the wording suggests that it is...im confused...
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They are not supposed to be anthro. Guess it is confusing when the characters have to do things with hooves rather than hands when you’d be more inclined to think it is the later.
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i got confused when u started talking about breasts, that subject only comes up in Anthro stories as cannon!females in the show do not have visible breasts, neither the ponies nor the dragons. so talking about them in a nonAnthro story feels out of place and sows confusion. Ember didnt have breasts in the last story, but now she inexplicably does...that also caused confusion, although i will admit that the idea of a busty Ember in BDSM fetishwear IS damn hot...
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That’s understandable. I wouldn’t compare the anatomy to the show since they would never show something like breasts in it. As for the situation with Ember, I wrote the previous story ages ago compared to this one and was trying to make this one more focused on the sex scenes. Not sure if that helps you out. If not just keep thinking about sexy Ember.
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when it comes to writing sequels, consistency is everything. if ur character didnt have tits in the last story, then ud better have a damn good reason she has them in following stories or it just doesnt make a lot of sense. now, if u had set it up that Ember grew in the tits while she was pregnant, that would have been fine. a little far fetched, but u could work with it in the story. see what im saying?
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Well just because I didn’t mention them in the previous story doesn’t mean they weren’t there. But would that fix your issue if I were to go back and amend that?
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i believe it would yes, i apologize if ive upset u in anyway, but continuity errors like that r one of my pet peeves. like i said in my last post, if Ember grew tits as a result of her pregnancy, it would work for story purposes. yeah, it would be a bit of a stretch, but not a deal breaker. if, say, female dragon's breast remained under developed until they have a kid to take of as their milk offers something vital to their hatchling's development. thus, the act of producing that milk causes their breasts to grow in and more fully develop. its a bit of a rough workaround, but its the most logical thing i can come up with in five minutes...at least that works without saying 'a Wizard did it'
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Or Celestia did it. XD But before I do so, any other issues with continuity that need addressing?
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ill take another look at the story and let u know, this was all based on a quick look, looking more in depth may yield more. that being said, anything else i find, ill be putting in a PM, that way we can talk about it without filling all ur comment space with the conversation..
Rainbow Dash couldn’t imagine this situation getting any worse.
“Live from Manehatten! Welcome to the Dr. Philly Show!” the announcer pony called out to the audience."
I just laugh so loud, is the kind of thing that happen to Rainbow Dash xD good stuff, keep going
im surprised you didn't do "jerry springer show" joke
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Admittedly I’m not too well versed in talk shows.
Did discord write this cause there was some fun chaos
KONO SPIKE DA!
Well then. Maybe they should become swingers so that it's alright for both of them.
Plot twist: They're ALL are the father(s)! I noticed that there are 7 dragons, each a color of the rainbow. It may be possible that by some weird dragon-pony mating magic, their sperm cells somehow fused during the orgy back then and that impregnated Rainbow...
Maybe. Who knows but you, Author.
At times I was questioning rather or not Spike was actually being serious.
plz continue!
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I’ve actually almost completed the next chapter. So it can be expected some time in the near future.
Yeeeeeeesss, you are back