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Luna needs her caffiene intake to wake up. Meanwhile, the changelings are invading Canterlot during the wedding. What could go wrong?

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Yes, his full name is “the Paul.”
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Created for Aragon’s Comedy (is serious buisiness) contest. Written and edited within a period of 36 hours. Help.

Rated teen cuz whipped cream

Submitted just before midnight

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Well this made my morning. Now all I need is a cup of coffee. Thank you for writing :twilightsheepish:

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Thank you fer lettin' me know ya liked it!

Oh man, this is great. :rainbowlaugh: I love the word-salad shenanigans in the middle, and how the drink turns out to be about 98% sprinkles. :derpytongue2:

I think there's a part in the middle where you have a runaway italics block, though. Should be an easy fix.

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I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for letting me know!

A moment of silence, please, for the magnificent, the amazing, the Paul.

Lovely tale of silly changelings and badass Luna. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the contest.

“Huzzah!” exclaimed the pony in front of the counter, as she repeatedly rang the bell that sat next to the large money machine thing.

Second wrong use of huzzah today. Odd.
Shouldn't it be an outcry of joy? Like when the Changeling returns to the counter and she finally can get the coffee?

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“Oh come on, Bean-y boy! You know how much I enjoy this bell!”

Am I crazy, or did I just see a Beanie and Cecil reference in a fanfic in 2019? c.c

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You might be crazy, although my diagnosis is not backed by a medical license...

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That was an outcry of joy. She was excited to see the pony responsible for bringing her the drink she so desired! X)

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