I am here to prove that even someone that has dyslexia can write stories. All feedback is appreciate​, and always have a smile.
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Rose luck is trying out a new flower in her store. Some red poppies. But the problem is that whenever she finish planting them, they somehow are turning yellow. She has no idea why they are doing this. They are supposed to be red! She will have red poppies in her store if it kills her.
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Cute, but looked like it needed more time with an editor, as there are a couple of issues.
"I am not a foul anymore. foal
time to rip what you have sewed." reap what you have sowed, because I didn't see anything that would infer threads.
Aside from that, good job and good story.
The case where complexity of crime points at the only person able to do it
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Thank you. I will address those issues. It is a hard time doing this when you are on your own.
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It is so easy sometimes.
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time to rip what you have sewed.
Honestly I thought that is a reference to Pratchett , he made that pun in one of stories. That sounds almost same.And it could infer the dim future of aforementioned pony.
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And I don't know how to respond to the other comment.
I have never heard of Pratchett.
This needs a proofreader. I gave up at 20% in.
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Terry Pratchett was one of the best modern British writers. Best known for "Diskworld" humorous fantasy novels set on a flat world where cliches and superstitions are taken to their logical conclusions. Critics say his style is similar to Wodehouse. I don't remember this particular pun, but Pratchett loved dissecting proverbs and loved characters who butcher proverbs. Also, Grim Reaper is a recurring character (sometimes protagonist or protagonist's employer or protagonist's grandfather), and there may be references to Jack the Ripper somewhere.
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Yeah I need help writing my stories but I am on own for the most part.
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people are wanting to read my stories.
Gave up at the 20 percent marker. That this great!
Here you go! Hope this helps: Looking For Editors!
Don't take this the wrong way, but is English your first language? And I'm no editor, but I'll give you this piece of writing advice: Don't mix tenses. When describing the action taking place, decide whether you are using present or past tense and stick with it.
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None taken. My writing is bad also my dyslexia doesn't help either. Also, I don't think there are any editors left on that page. I have seen dozens of request for editors go unanswered for that group.
8764937 Part of that is because authors in that group tend to take advantage of free editing without contributing back. One of the best things you can do is find another author and edit each other's stuff, which lets you *both* get better. I've had quite a few of those, and I've helped out others while they helped out me.
Ahem. Helped me out. (edit)
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Yeah that what I try to do from time to time. Also nice avatar.
I usually vote on a fic I read, but I just can't place any vote here..... There are a ton of grammatical errors and spelling errors here, but at the same time, the scenario is incredibly funny and I somehow feel this portrayal fits them very well. So I'm conflicted on this fic.
You should get yourself a proofreader. You have a great talent for coming up with entertaining scenarios, but the grammar and spelling problems you have make your fics hard to read and that weakens the enjoyment.
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This is unfortunate and definitely not helping new pony authors to improve (or even start writing ponyfics) if a group offering help through editors is in a state like this. What happened exactly that it could come so far?
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Thank you for reading.
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Your welcome.
And I recommend getting in touch with some people to proofread your stories. If all fails, I would offer myself to assist with this.