Fluttershy has lived her whole life in the great city of Cloudsdale, until a fateful accident knocks her to the ground. Scared and alone, she finds her way to Ponyville, where she is introduced to Whispering Hedges, an Earth pony who lives on the edge of the nearby Everfree Forest.
Additional thanks to TheArcher20 for feedback and support, since without him I most likely never would have put this up here.
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Whoo boy, here goes nothing!
To anyone interested, this is actually my first story ever, of any kind, so please, dig right in and don't hold back (not that there's really much to critique, but feedback is always a pleasure...i think
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Enjoy!
Looks like the start of a good story, I hope there's more to come. And hey, unlike my stories you can read this without half-a-dozen horrible typos punching you in the face. Metaphorically, obviously.
For a first story it seems very well polished, better written than my stuff here if also a very different type of story. Keep up the good work.
An excellent start. Please continue.
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Good gravy, thanks
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there will be more eventually, but I can't promise a schedule of any sort, the prologue took me almost a month (stage fright even online? OKAY
anywho, I'm now in unplanned territory with the flight camp, so i gotta get my brain in gear and out of the "OH GOD i posted a story WHAT DOOOO" excitement
957580 Keep a pad or something on you to write on if you ever get any inspiration, that's how pretty much all of my recent "My Little Skaven" was made. I really should have been taking notes during that lecture, but by the Mighty Thor it was maths!
*Ahem*
My horrible study habits aside, you could also stay up until 2am while having drunken around 2 letres of pepsi (or any other brand of cola-flavoured soft drink) within the last 8 hours and see how that helps. Where do you think I write most of Justice Itself?
Then again I'm as unhealthy as
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Not the baked bads!!!
unfortunately my midnight inspiration usually hits a bit closer to 4am, that seems to be my best school essay writing time at least
which really sucks since I'm generally a morning person...oh well, caffeine ahoy!
it might be my imagination, but I think I'm getting faster at this writing schtick
interesting. of course i should be taking my much needed break i couldn't help but check out what you got. good job, no errors i saw. good luck continuing it.
now if you'll excuse me i got homework to attend to dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
Chapter 2, as promised
Fantastic. Update soon.
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Going to try to be MUCH better about that than i have been (three months is BS, even by my scales
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Glad you're still enjoying it though