• Published 8th Feb 2018
  • 163 Views, 15 Comments

Fallout Equestria: A Song of Hope - Vitobru



Rae Starlight, a pegasus from Stable 68, has her world shattered one day by the Steel Rangers. She flees into the Equestrian Wastes and begins a journey to save not only herself, but those other ponies of the Wasteland.

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Comments ( 9 )

8722158
Hey, if you're available in the future, it would be great to get an outside eye on my work so far! If you're available for proofreading, I would be really appreciative.

I would suggest adding this to more F:OE folders that fit the story theme as to gain more exposure.

8731790
Are you talking about the FoE: World group I submitted it to?

8732877
Ye. There are more applicable folders. Such as 'Ongoing' or whatever.

8733814
Oh. I found out what you're talking about. I wasn't the one who posted the story there, so I didn't even know it was there until today.

It's an interesting start, a bit too fast paced for my liking, but has the making of a fun little story. for someones first jump into FoE writing, I got a feeling that once you get the handle on what your trying to do, your going to have a lot of fun, and get a few fans. If you want any advise from one writer for FoE to another, more you wright, the better you will get at it, so keep it up.

I'm going to have to assume there were some bridges there somewhere that weren't described because I find it hard to believe a train could swim off of an island. :pinkiehappy: Just saying.

Overall, what you've got so far is interesting, and worth keeping an eye on. You've earned yourself a watch!

S. A. T. S. was mentioned and explained in the last chapter. Wasn’t sure if you knew.

HI! IT'S ME! NOT AUSTIN!
I finished Chapter II! Woo-hoo!!

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