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CJN


I'm a misfit gamer who see illusions.

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This story is a sequel to Fallout: Equestria - Shadow War


Twilight Sparkle invented many things during the Great War.

Artificial Alicorns...

The Gardens of Equestria megaspell...

But there was one whose identity and origin was known only by her. A monster whose power was even greater than her own.

Now, locked within Maripony, the two have one last encounter. Moments before Twilight's fate at the hands of the Goddess.

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That was... umm... I have no idea what to say to that, it was interesting sure.

While I liked the idea of this, I'd rather prefer the prospect that the whole thing deviated from MLP canon where the Zebra Empire (or Roaman Empire) declared war on it. Yep, because the Roamans declared war on Equestria, the whole thing deviated into Fallout Equestria. And that was after Discord was turned to stone again.

Yep, there were no events after: no Canterlot Wedding, no Twilight Sparkle becoming an alicorn and a princess, et cetera. I'm going for the whole "deviate after Discord got turned into stone again" thing, thank you very much.

CJN

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Thank you, I appreciate your view of the story.

Well, I have an anthology in mind. It's going to be set during the war. And one of the ideas is that things after Discord's defeat did happen, just not in the way they happened in the show.

And not every season will be retold, no. Just certain moments.

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Cool.

I might apologize for this, but I'm actually very stingy when I read the parts where Spark allowed Princess Twilight Sparkle to be killed by Trixie via the vat of Taint. Yep, I was actually very salty when I read that part. Very, very stingy and salty, all because he was experimented upon by Twilight in her grief. She should've stopped and instead talk to him first.

And yes, I say this because I like Twilight Sparkle, to the point I simped for her.

Though, it would be awesome when someone not only gradually stopped Spark during whatever his doing once he made himself known, but also blunted his cultist hordes and shattered his mind by verball pointing out that all his great deeds come with terrible deeds - the murder of his own paternal figure Twilight Sparkle via Trixie, the deaths of all the Crystal Ponies, and all those - and then going on a vicious verbal rampage that destroyed EVERYTHING Spark sought for. And finally ending it by saying he should've thought used his powers before or during his experimentation and demand and then listen to Twilight why she's doing this.

And also that the same someone, broken by what Spark had said, decided to end the world by unleashing "Frodbrokna", a concentrated magical attack utilizing Self-Replicating Blood Magic.

And yes, I felt VERY SALTY AND STINGY when Twilight was killed, especially when Spark allowed Trixie to kill her. That's the most contending point I have. And also very bloodthirsty for Spark's humiliation (by verbally destroying what he thinks he'd achieve) and death; friggin' hated that guy now.

As for the Frodbrokna and SRBM, they're from Godherja: The Dying World, a total conversion mod for Crusader Kings 3.

Uh, I apologize for my rant and for my metaphorical thirst for metaphorical blood towards yer character.

CJN

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I see, haha.

Well, I'm glad I wrote him well enough to evoke those kinds of feelings in someone.

Also, Spark never claimed to be a saint, himself. He played his hoof during the war, all of it driven by rage.

The anthology will go into detail about his conflicted feelings towards Twilight.

Twilight will also deal with her feelings towards him, and how she had to cover him up from the public view.

Granted they won't be the focal point of the anthology, but it will be fun to explore.

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Cool. I'd also like for Spark to suffer for what he did to Twilight. Can't wait to see the chapter where he has to suffer for all his crimes.

CJN

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Uh......

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No offense, but I hate Spark thanks to what he did in this fanfic. And I apologize for sounding so bloodthirsty.

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