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Is this 1st person or 3rd person I really can't tell
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It's third-person limited by the looks of it, but the narration is choppy and makes the perspective difficult to grasp.
My main issues is I hated the moral of that episode. Applejack was right to want those bats gone. There is no guarantee that the bats will stay on that one orchard. But love this concept.
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3rd person. Sorry for confusing you.
She's not Fluttershy or FlutterBat she's Fluttercubus!!!!
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You know actual vampire lore, states they can act very lustful when they want blood, so I wanted to show a tad bit of that with Flutterbat, while keeping it tame for the most part. The real fun comes later.
Flutter-Bat is turning into Flutter-Succubus.
You must continue this story!
Oh and an idea I had, have Fluttershy be able to turn into flutterbat at will.
It seems pretty good and gripping, a few grammatical errors and misspellings are present, but it's good nonetheless. As soon as I read the second chapter I could help edit them out if you'd like
I'll start reading after the 5th chapter
Its just fine, take your time, you decide where the story goes and how it ends.We understand why it took a while.
The only way to prevent Fluttershy to cause harm is for Applejack to give pleasure.
It was cute very cute.
But I can't help but wonder will Fluttershy and flutterbat's minds merge together at some point creating a badass vampire version of Fluttershy? Cause that would be awesome!
Also good to know this story is not dead.
Please update this again soon.
A nice end to a nice story.
Also first comment yay.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/434086/a-review-you-drive-me-batty
Link to your review! Don't know how I missed posting this here. 0.0
Well here’s your Review. I hope you’re not too disappointed. But contact me and we can make it the best it can be.