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Through thick and thin Princess Twilight Sparkle and her friends have defeated whatever fate could throw at them, but only just. It's time for a new strategy to secure Equestria's safety. Now that the Storm King has been defeated, it will take all of Twilight's nerve and cunning to stop his Commanders from achieving their ultimate goal: World Domination.

An attempt at playing war straight with the show. Canon up to Season 7, the Movie, and some of the IDW comics.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

and sure she shirked you and left for the spa instead of entertaining any sort of diplomacy. She didn't even let you mention that Celestia had asked for her personally.

Yeah, most people seem to forget that part and just jump straight to Twilight's mess-up. It was a pretty dumb move on Novo's part. Not that that excuses Twilight's actions, of course...

Great chapter so far! I'm looking forward to the rest!

You think there will be some infighting among the Storm King's forces like commander vs commander?

Also, is it safe to say that we can kiss Equestrian-Hippogriff relations goodbye in this timeline?

Perhaps. Especially once they here that their leader is dead.

I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. You, sir, have earned yourself a tracker!

I deeply enjoy this characterization of Twilight as this blisteringly efficient, MacGyver-meets-Joan of Arc type. "Never run a military before? Allow me to familiarize myself with it in an afternoon and revolutionize our military overnight." :twilightsmile:

"I just can't believe they fell through the cracks like that," Twilight said.

I see what you did there. :ajsmug:

You had my curiosity. Now you have my attention. And a follow.

Join the club. :)

"You see, officers, when a mysterious enemy shows up and asks for your complete and total surrender, we, from now on, will not allow them to continue to monologue.

This line, right here, was the final nail in the coffin for any attempt I might have made to not like this story. It's just on point.

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