• Member Since 18th Dec, 2013
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DJSkywalker


Just a fan who likes to share his ideas through stories that people seem to like.

Comments ( 20 )

This looks like an interesting story so far. Will be looking forward to see what will happen next

Just came by to say, the description sounds like the setup for one of Bendy's short stories.

Okay, I’m definitely looking forward to more of this. The premise is interesting and the dialogue is...something else. (The sex is great too)

I wanted to reactivate my account just to say this.

Holy fuck you got exactly the fetish i’ve been having in my mind a long time. Dusk shine, a pony domming a human, pony on human, stallion on male, dom pony talking down to sub pony. Umph to the max.

i’ll relearn the whole sites new features just to keep track of this.

this is great...
can't wait for chapter 3

Screwed over by Celestia. Why did he not expect this? Other than that, I really can't see any version of Twilight Sparkle, male or not, being this rough and demeaning towards someone. Not to mention how vulgar he (Dusk) choose to express himself, he is a canterlot pony as such one would expect a more elegant and refined way of speaking. That the main character is so eager to ascribe feminine characteristics to himself almost sounds like dusk did more than just switching pain to pleasure and loosening him up with that spell. Which would be Dark Magic and I do not think he would use such so casually. Other than this it is well written and certainly worth keeping an eye on to see how it ultimately ends.

There are so many ways this could go...

I... I can't believe someone did it. Yes... YES....

I human (male) on stallion clopfic? Thanks a ton, hon. :twilightsmile:

Once, twice, six times, eight times, before, after, regularly on Saturday afternoons, I might object to daily, but otherwise... :twistnerd:

* Moaning sexually* Oooooh! Oh I wish I could be Dusk Shine's little human male slut mare ! * sings my poem I wrote * I'm a maaare in heat and I neeed my meeeeat , a nice pony's diiiick would be sweeeet !:raritystarry::raritywink: Yeah I'm a slutty pony and I know it ! :heart: :twilightsmile:

The princess’ smile changes to a small smirk but you only catch a glimpse of it, sending the butterflies in your stomach fluttering. “On a random chance, it has been decided that you have been granted an opportunity to join in Equestria’s society as one of our own.”

...Not sure if scam or not. HOW DO I KNOW IF IT'S ACTUALLY A SCAM AND IF I WILL ACTUALLY GET MY FREE CAR THIS TIME?

Is the story dead

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*starts to dig grave* Need to make it deep

Is there any hope for an update on this story, I really like it?

Every day we get closer and closer to one year:fluttershyouch:

Y no update?

Any plans on updating?

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