Rarity always takes pride in her mane, but she could never get it as fabulous looking as she does without her special hairbrush. So naturally, when it goes missing, there will be hell to pay...
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Dat Elijah.
This made me laugh a bit and I like it.
Will we ever hear of Applejack's forced adventures into parts unknown?
hmmmm...?
995373 I really have no life
995387 Thanks! The idea was to make a feel-good story that was funny, kinda like it could be an actual episode, minus the fourth wall incident at the end.
Clean hairbrushs? I like the clean the thing in the dryer that holds all the soft stuff but hairbrushs?
Quite an interesting story you have here. I can't help but think that Rarity might be bipolar in this story.
995411 Psh! Who doesn't like to clean hairbrushes?
Silly Elijah.
995396 Perhaps...
995411 Well cleaning hairbrushes is a great pastime, you should try it.
995539 Only a little bit
Well we all have those days. People randomly coming in and stealing things. Have a mustache.
995555 Here, have this:
It's of no use to me anymore. 
995411 Well, I mean, if you have long hair (like Rarity) and you fail to clean the brush from time to time, you get a build up of hair and sometimes...gunk, depending on what your hair has been through (gel/hairspray/etc). so...yeah. You should clean your hairbrushes.
Elijah finished typing the last words into the story. The fourteen year old boy reread his masterpiece, then hit his face into the keyboard.
"I have no life."
I can relate, brother.
995548 Silly me
995563 I LOVE YOUR NAME. SEETHER IS AN EXCELLENT BAND.
Aslo thanks for the stache!
995638 Thank you! I won't abuse it, and will only purchase the best of cocaine with it.
995658 Oh course in the story it was more of a "Spikes kinda creepy" thing.
995711 Oh, I know what you were going for
Just clearing up spikethed's confusion 
995711 If I ever catch you doing anything else with it, I'll take it back!
Live are overrated, trust me on this! Now funny and clever pony stories, those are something much more important!
I loved the whimsy and humour of it. And nopony got torn apart or emotionally devastated!
My only (totally unasked for) suggestion would be to change the early references to 'hair' to 'mane' for consistency, and maybe change "morning hair" to "pillow mane" ?
995658 yeah i guess thats why im like
on the hairbush i never do my hair bed head for me benefit of being a guy with short hair
ahem....*begins to sing*
[youtube=LtHr7gluh08]
996426 I fixed it! No no one has to die... except Elijah, but you can't kill one which has no life.
The ending.
In the words of Rarity, "Isn't always the last place you look."
It's cool bro, I know that feel.
Just look up more pictures of ponies and you'll feel better
Oh, Rarity.
996021
indeed, now if only I could do pmvs....
There is one that has not been done that is so obvious and fitting its almost unbelievable it hasn't been done.
pinkie loves her lips!
I even know tons of parts that would be perfect....
995792 Damn, I need this stache! How else am I to buy cocaine?
995830 Mane sounds... odd. They do refer to it as hair throughout the series, so that's why I used hair, otherwise, mane would have been my choice of words.
995918 This fits the story better then anything else in the world.
996622 Glad you liked!
996848 flippingsocial.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/Nobody-cares-baby....jpg
997259 profile.ak.fbcdn.net/hprofile-ak-snc4/373473_283495438361653_1197944177_n.jpg
997376
Eeyup 
997454 Of course! Best remedy to everything!
998142 I would love to see that PMV!
998938 Maybe I could show you where the illegal mustache factory is?
999277 That you defiantly should.
999285 lancescurv.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/Dark-Alleyway.jpg
First, you walk halfway down this alleway. Take a right and go through the door that says: Do Not Go Through This Door. Upon entering, you will meet a man with a yellow fisherman's jacket and a hook for a hand. His name is Henry Jefferson. Tell him the secret password: I want mustaches, yo. He will take you to the illegal mustache factory. Congratulations.
999311 Thanks! Now I can buy all manners of cocaine!
999320 Good luck! *Hey Henry, there's this guy who'll be coming along soon-*
Ok, I admit, that had me laughing hard.
And dat ending.
Take my mustaches and like them.
995918
Oh my God... That's SOOO FUNNYYYYYY
999450 Then he has the best name evah.
999955 Gladly! I collect mustaches you see... And I'm glad I was able to make you lol!
wut?
Bro... wat.
Something something giant haaa aaaat~
And we love you for it.
1714917
I died.
Kick-ass story.
This was cute. Very friendly with a nice flow and not too much random at least until the end. Also, it seems Pinkie has a good sense of smell, so good she can smell hats, lol.
-Reader Out-
4298297 This was another story that showed I was improving in my writing. In this point at time I still wasn't too into Rarity, but over time she would become my favorite.
I also love Pinkie in this (if I do say so myself). I gave her some lovely qualities.
lol... at the end there, I feel ya 8'D
hahaha.
That Ending is so Me!
6240295 oh my god this story is almost three years old
where does the time go
6241066 Wow! I didn't ever realise That!
6241071 yeah, this story was written when I was just a lad of 14. I've grown as a write significantly since then—I'd recommend reading my newer stories if you'd so wish.
6241119 Sure, I'll cheek them out When I'll have the time.
The conclusion killed me.