• Member Since 2nd Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen 11 hours ago

cornholio4


E

Takes place after the first issue of MLP: Friends Forever.

After the equestria Super Chef Competition, Marine Sandwhich has a bone to pick with Applejack.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Yeah, the comics do need more accusations. I'm getting a little tired of all the ones for Anon a Miss

8706601
I second that

I'm accepting this as canon; Marine deserved this.

8707044

8706749

8706601
Thanks but what do you guys think about me deciding to have marine and cheese be siblings, I decide don't hat idea after realising they had he same second name

Was hopingfor feedback on that idea to be honest

I like this one, there a Next Generation fic where Cheeze and Pinkie's child has a mental condition, they sought help from her for this. Thou mostly asking for some small advice,a s she had the same thing. But her's was far worse, after the competition and her losing her rep and all, she went total nuts andhad to be placed in a maximum security ward.

9106085
Devaint art site, was next generation pages. There a lot of next generations so tracking it down be extra hard,.

ANW

I'm sorry, but I have to bring this up.
I can't tell who was talking.
The giant paragraph in the middle of the first part makes it sound like Applejack was saying sorry, but then it seems like it went back to Marine with out any way to tell.
Before you say anything using ... does not count. It's used as a pause or lingering sentence, and not an interruption by itself.
"Hey can you..."
"Sorry, too busy here"
That's how you do an interruption.
You can also use a dash (-) instead of the dots. ~ Works too.

9314744
Sore you for making It confusing

Login or register to comment