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Twilight Sparkle and Fizzlepop "Tempest Shadow" Berrytwist discover they have more in common than they knew.

A short fic that I had kicking around in my head the past couple days.

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Dusk Melody #1 · Feb 1st, 2018 · · ·

Her name's Fizzlepop, not Fizzleberry

xanderman1201 #2 · Feb 1st, 2018 · · ·

Fizzleberry "Tempest Shadow" Berrytwist

It's Fizzlepop

LucidTech #3 · Feb 1st, 2018 · · ·

Fixed, ty. Had it right in the chapter though, wonder how I managed that.

FlamingMane #4 · Feb 2nd, 2018 · 1 · ·

Complete? This looks like a start of great story O..O

LucidTech #5 · Feb 2nd, 2018 · 2 · ·

I didn't have anywhere else I wanted to take it, not to mention that there's heaps better stories than this one that do romance infinitely better. This is just a scene that I wanted to get down.

mycarhasaMoustache

mycarhasaMoustache #6 · Feb 5th, 2018 · 1 · ·

This is really good. If a short story leaves you wanting more it is definitely doing something right. Nice work.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #7 · Mar 26th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Very nice. I especially like Twilight’s brief pedantic moment.

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