From the day we're born we all have a destiny. For a pony, a destiny is literally emblazoned on their bodies. Sometimes your dream doesn't seem to match your mark, sometimes you have to find how it does, other times it just does.
For Kiwe, a zony colt in Manehattan, his dream is to be a world-renowned chef. But will life go as he wishes it or will his mark change his path like it has for so many others?
With help from his zebra mother and pony father, will he be able to accomplish his dreams, or will the challenges in the big city prove too much between bullies, friends, and the challenges of life?
Rated teen for sexual references and content.
This is a clop free story.
Coverart (adorable) by FireMuffin.
Editing through 'Party' by Comrade Bagel Muffin.
Interesting, very interesting. You've caught my attention. Do try to keep it.
i'm into it keep it up
This is a very interesting story so far. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you!
I plan to and hope to.
This was a really wonderful chapter. Guess Kiwe isn't as big an outcast as he thought.
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I know, right?!
I was going to go any way when writing this part but it flowed better and makes it SO different than a trope.
Thanks!
Now that was a great chapter. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Actually I think that means it should still have a sex tag.
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Thanks for that, I appreciate the assistance and all that, do you by chance have any comments about the story itself, after nearly 30K words.
I happen to notice you comment on my stories after several chapters with a criticism about the description page, I'm just wondering if you actually read my stories or just scan the opening page for issues.
Now this was a fun chapter, especially when Kiwe showed his cooking skills.
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Thanks for the comment, glad you liked it.
The same mad skills is how I started, so he's on the right track.
Good to see Kiwe's cooking skills are improving. And he does have a good (if gruff) teacher.
really good start to this story, dang kiwe fucked up there a little, poor colt xD
but what struck me the most was the price of that milkshake, 7 FUCKING BITS ?! Oo
ok now i can see why twilights spell's can backfire so dramatically xD
that was a real heart worming chapter