Forever free

A story never truly ends. All it takes is a new voice to breathe fresh blood into it's words. And sometimes, new actors unwillingly fill the roles of those long past.

Massively edited, the new versions are probably better.

Chapters (7)

Part 1: Old version · 22nd Dec 2011 · 1,458 words
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Part 2: Old version · 22nd Dec 2011 · 2,403 words
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Part 3: Old version · 22nd Dec 2011 · 2,459 words
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Part 4: Old version · 22nd Dec 2011 · 3,298 words
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Forever freed · 10th Dec 2011 · 1,145 words
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Forever trapped · 10th Dec 2011 · 823 words
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Part 1: edited · 22nd Dec 2011 · 2,765 words
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Jade Mer

Jade Mer #1 · Dec 8th, 2011 · · · Part 1: Old version ·

Ooooh, I liked it! Great story!

Pumpkin-dreams

Pumpkin-dreams #2 · Dec 8th, 2011 · · · Part 1: Old version ·

56707 Thanks!

Meta Knight

Meta Knight #3 · Dec 9th, 2011 · · · Part 2: Old version ·

terrific

Pumpkin-dreams

Pumpkin-dreams #4 · Dec 9th, 2011 · · · Part 2: Old version ·

58294

PPFW Combo Breaker

PPFW Combo Breaker #5 · Dec 9th, 2011 · · · Part 3: Old version ·

I think it would be prudent to ask Admiral Akbar's opinion on this!

Pumpkin-dreams

Pumpkin-dreams #6 · Dec 10th, 2011 · · · Part 3: Old version ·

59136 He's too busy having a drink of tea. :P

TheDangboy

TheDangboy #7 · Dec 10th, 2011 · · · Part 3: Old version ·

You know its kind of weird but i noticed that if he was Forever free but had no friends wouldn't he be forever alone?

Pumpkin-dreams

Pumpkin-dreams #8 · Dec 10th, 2011 · · · Part 3: Old version ·

59530 Yes, yes he would be.

PPFW Combo Breaker

PPFW Combo Breaker #9 · Dec 10th, 2011 · · · Part 4: Old version ·

Cliffhangers FTW

Pumpkin-dreams

Pumpkin-dreams #10 · Dec 10th, 2011 · · · Part 4: Old version ·

60322

PPFW Combo Breaker

PPFW Combo Breaker #11 · Dec 10th, 2011 · · · Forever trapped ·

While reading this I was reminded of the song "Forever Young" or "Young Forever" whatever you want to call it!
Anyway link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1nbvplgElw

Good story!

Pumpkin-dreams

Pumpkin-dreams #12 · Dec 10th, 2011 · · · Forever trapped ·

60493 Thanks for reading!
Do you think I could submit this to EQD? I've been considering taking a try at it.

TheDangboy

TheDangboy #13 · Dec 15th, 2011 · · · Forever freed ·

It is "sad" yet the very ending made me smile because in the end she got what she wanted-and deserved. However if the last two paragraphs weren't there it would be super sad. Thank you for giving me such a beautifully written story that i could not possibly ever wright.