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Otaku anime and Manga. so much imagination to draw and write,

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Follow the adventure Dusk shine in it is parody alternative of the manga Unexplected love life of Dusk Shine.In his versions Dusk and his sister go to ponyville to make friends but in his new city with his shape shifting adopting sister,with the animals who hates him and the mares who fall in love him.It life going become unexpected...of comedies

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Unexplect Unexpected

Your grammar is in serious need of an editor.

English is not your first language.

The story idea sounds nice, but the grammar sounds painful

I do hope you're aware you're copying someone else's published work here but with a changeling instead of dragon. meme-asaurus wrote TULLODS first, after which the manga was made.

Meanwhile in Canterlot Castle ... The sun princess was busy at a cake-eating contest and she had forgotten that she had to go to Ponyville for the summer festival.

I lmao so hard I fell off my chair, also you have my attention with your story.

"My prince, wait, the priest had not finished his practice." Rarity say she was wearing a wedding dress.

Rarity... What the hell?

I'm positive that after all that experience, Dusk would choose a sick day over the girls, any day! :rainbowlaugh:

Dusk, Eclipse, Spike go to Rarity's shop to get dry. The stallion is shaking to make rain drops on him but he has accidentally wet Rarity.

You repeated this paragraph twice. Anyways excellent job on this chapter! 2 chapters in 1 day, you're putting in work, my good friend. :pinkiehappy:

Sooo.... A wendigo is gonna be living with them & more importantly inside Dusk's sister? ... This may backfire later on...

Inside the earring

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Frost she inside the earring

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But she does take over from time to time.

I found great enjoyment out of this, Trixie as a new love interest & the girls were jealous was hilarious! XD

She bucking Dusk out of her bedroom window and Frost who witness found the situation comical. "Perverse!"

Welp, that sleepover ended well :rainbowlaugh:

English is not your first language.

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not really but most of the written ones translate their history into French to English.And I do the same thing

An Oc Zebra falling in love with Dusk, ohhh boy this is getting good! :pinkiehappy:

That boy getting an ass whooping from the animals is gonna take its toll on him one day! :rainbowlaugh:

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Yeah animal of ponyville very hate him

Oh great, Moony has another demon inside her head, not good for poor Dusk... But at least the wedding was great :rainbowlaugh:

Wait, so while Dusk was getting his ass kicked by the jagar, did Moony just get another spirit!?

First animals beat up Duskb now jealous stallions are beating him up :rainbowlaugh:

A brand new love rival for the girls & some new spirits for Moony! Business is picking up!

Not bad but you called Rarity "him" a few times just as the D.Dogs appeared.

Nothing too different from the original episode, but still a good read.

You should fix the synopsis. It's one big run-on sentence.

parody alternative type manga Who Dusk

What's up with the "Who"?

Does this have any love or are they just trying to get his attention to see who he'll pick?

Panic, chaos, & discord! Another day of the girls trying to romance Dusk.

That Link & Zelda was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

From the animals to the other stallions, Dusk always gets the smackdown! :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Dj264 deleted Aug 1st, 2018

I really wish Dusk would fight back a little bit .

"You can be sorry!" Her eyes turn green and she casts a spell. "Listen kid, I would not let anyone stop my project and find my daughter!"

If Chrysalis' daughter is who I think it is, its gonna be the shocker of the year!

How long till the next chapter because I want to see a Eclipse vs Chrysalis fight happen.

Great chapter and a plus for Moony beating up everyone in this chapter. Dusk is going to turn everything upside down to look for his sister. and will Moony meet up with Thorax later on?

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In future chapter yes, Moony will meet Thorax.

Damn your cliffhangers, you bastard!

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the cliffhangers is too shocking? Because I had imagined it for a long time when I imagined the chapters of Canterlot's wedding

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how long till the next chapter?

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The chapter Canterlot Wedding Part 3 coming in this week or the other
But First i need to working in the next chapter poke-school,Pofessor fluttetshy and a new fiction crossover

Thank God for that main character plot armor that saved Moony :rainbowlaugh:

Glad that she was saved in time by her boyfriend.

and just the salmon of nightmares, he has now introduced himself to dusk

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and just the salmon of nightmares, he has now introduced himself to dusk

Soooo... Moony has Changeling bodyguards & 2 new spirits.... Just another day in Ponyville.

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