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DragonMaster24921


Just another brony writing stories about ponies

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Shuffle Suite, an outspoken boy is about to enroll in Canterlot High. His life will soon be turned upside down when he meets a certain stage magician then things really get turned up for the teen. Shenanigans will ensue

The artwork is done by Ragga_Muffin!

Chapters (20)
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Comments ( 53 )

All right! A POME story with Trixie! This ought to be good!

8715482
It's a group of stories all intertwined in some way
Here's a link for the entire set

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/208931/pome-library

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POME stands for the story that started the whole group: The Pie of My Eye!

One word: Trixella! :rainbowlaugh:

Something tells me Shuffle and Zero are gonna be good friends.... We'll see as the story continues. :ajsmug:

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Thanks ragga muffin suprised me with it and I was blown away myself

I guess I have to thank you twice now. One is for the 'shout out' for me editing your story (first time I tried I hope I did well.) Secondly for the small mention of my OC. :pinkiecrazy:

As for the chapter itself, things are getting interesting. A star wars lightsaber?! Awesome! And it seems that Shuffle and Trixie are finally going to meet each other! Can't wait for the next chapter! :trollestia:

Sunset Shimmer had entered the gym and Shuffles day had just gotten even worse.

Oh boy! Now things are getting interestiing! :eeyup:

CSC

Oh boy, there's gonna be major confusion and a misunderstanding.

Well shit. If thats not an upcoming conflict I dont know what is.

Treble: WHERE IS THE SMEXY TIMES, GAIGE GOT LAID WHAT ABOUT THIS REJECT!

WAIT A MINUTE.

Im waiting for the confrontation. Shuffle gonna be mad, Sunset gonna be confused, everybody gonna be confused.

CSC

Whoa, now things are getting interesting.

typos
"today I was verbal. attacked by him."
"D8nalky"
"ty8ng"

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I looked for the ty8ng error can you point it out, please,

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"The entire class was stunned into silence, Sunset was the captain of the Canterlot High Fencing Team, so her ty8ng with this random kid was something no one expected."
is the full sentence

CSC

I sure hope things get better

Oh come on! Just when they're about talk things out you have to stop there. Still good chapter there dragon. Looking forward to the next. :eeyup:

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OH COME ON I COMBED THIS 7 TIMES what did I miss?

not bad but ya still need an editor.
There is a group all about looking for editors if ya didn't know

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He put it mildly, for the record, because you're in dire need of an editor. But the idea of the story is alright, even if Shuffle's getting real close to cutting himself on all that edge.

I dislike Trixie's mother.

I WONDER WHY

9082396
and then shuffle gonna be super confused when learning about equestria

“How am I going to tell her the truth?” he queried aloud, grasping the paper in his hand, putting it in a drawer of the island countertop next to the table. He got up, leaving the kitchen and heading to bed as well.

wat?

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thanx for the catch, apparently Grammarly says that's a real card

CSC

It was good, especially the Halloween prank, but the ending seemed rushed. Other than that, whoa.

CSC

Nice chapter, and Shuffle is actually starting to become likeable.

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Thanks, I appreciating your continuous support of my work.

CSC

Great update. And wooooow that jab......

CSC

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Sorry, insult.

Comment posted by CSC deleted Dec 31st, 2018
CSC

Anyway, when’s he ever going to apologize for being rude in the first place? I take it never? Either way, keep going!!

CSC

Good chapter

You should link to Ragga_Muffin's profile. Please respond to this comment.

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Why? Beyond early edits (which i gave credit for) and the story pic (which has his name on it) he hasn't do e anything for the story.

CSC

Whoa.......


Keep going!!!

“Trixtella Lulamoon, what did you do this time?” A woman called from down the hall.

Umm, isn’t Trixie short for Beatrix or in some cases Patricia?

“It was absolutely abysmal. Four more temp workers were let off so I spent the vast majority of the night trying to cover for the lack of hands… and that girl of yours? She ain't right… with the magic I mean. She's going to have to learn sooner or later that that magic act isn't going to get her anywhere.”

Who’s talking here? From context I think the father but the last part of the paragraph throws me off. He says that Trixie needs to learn to let go of the magic but then he’s defending it.

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