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Offered a second chance at life by divine beings, a creature playing as a pawn in a celestial plan, finds itself in the world of Equestria. With no previous memories of its earlier life or awakening, it sets out on a mission of self-discovery. Its journey taking it to a peaceful village. Can the saviours of Equestria help the creature remembering its past, thereby unlocking its calling, or will the demons haunting the mind of the creature thwart the gods grand design?

Author:
My first MLP story. I hope you will enjoy it. Drop a comment if you'd like to share your constructive criticism, so that I may improve in my writing. This story takes place after the changeling invasion.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 16 )

Ok, you need to work on the grammar, other than that, cool story! I look forward to seeing new chapters! :pinkiehappy:

Thank you for the feedback! I'll be uploading chapter 3 shortly. I'll be introducing more of the mc:s as I go along. I got ideas for chapter 4 and further already so don't worry, I am not finishing this any time soon. Thanks again for reading my story.

Aaarrgh!:flutterrage:

I was hoping this was Never Ending Story related; you've got the medallion there.

Great chapter.
Can't wait for next one and probably the plot as well.

Thanks again for the feedback. I noticed some inconsitencies in the story and changed it up a little. Also added a new cover image, that fits the story better.

Hope you will continue to read and next chapter is probably due early next week.

Stay classy everypony

//ZergPony

I loved the chapter, and the excellent plot to the story as well! Keep up the good work, zerg! :pinkiehappy:

Hello everypony

Sorry for the wait, but here it is. A new chapter.

Would also like to add that I am working on a one-shot. Not going to reveal anything else, other than it'll be one containing comedy.

Hope you find your time to read it when I am done, and that you want to continue reading A Tale Of Ice And Fire aswell.

Stay smexy

//ZergPony

lol, Pinkie and the brain ftw :trollestia:

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Indeed. Hope you like it. :twilightsmile:

*me reading the reveal* "She!? The pony isn't a guy? BS! Reread!
*goes back and does exactly that* "Okay, you win this round..."

In all seriousness though, this story intrigues me.encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTtnTSlNxePAZ2bTuNY4mfRJ0XTG8Yi7jDH4fur5XRiVqNYMK4I

Throughout these chapters, I'm noticing a distinct lack of contractions (Examples: they're, I'm, aren't, etc.). Not much else outside of that though. On another note, would you like an editor for this story (just thought I should ask)?

2447963 Heya. I will start off with that you're absolutely right. I've looked some of the chapters over and changed a little here and there to make it more smooth, probably will be more mindful of that in the future. (My mother tongue rarely uses contractions at all, and if it does, it's considered some kind of slang)

Also if you'd really like to look over current and future chapters, be my guest. I'm halfway through the latest chapter, also doing a slice of life story on the side. If you feel up to it I'll gladly let you look it over. I always appreciate some outside advice, it's hard to get everything right all on your own after all. :twilightsmile:

//ZergPony

2452209 I would be glad to. I should mention I'm not perfect, but I can definitely help.

On another note, what is your mother tongue? I'm feeling intrigued by this.

2457216 It's swedish. :twilightsmile:

I could send the chapter to you when I'm done with it, via email, perhaps?

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