This story has nothing to do with my real parents but this is just how my oc grew up and what he went through. I worked on this with a friend from school she helped me out a little bit but i never actually got to it and finished it. at the time i wrote this my oc looked different so there is a lot to do in this story lol. but i hope you guys enjoy what i have so far. it aint the best but idk i just hope you like it.
it is about how my oc was born and the events that are to come from one night that was tragic. and how he grew up on his own and had to live in the streets and help his mother whom he loved very much live.
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I liked it :)
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It was all the thumbnail... and uh... I'll read this tomorrow...
Nice start. Let's see where this tale goes.
Not my cup of tea. Good writing though.
As long as you are having fun with the story keep writing. Laters.
Well, that escalated quickly.
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Right from the start: Your story description is less of a summary and more of an explanation. You've told us what the story is, and even what it's about, but the summary should be more like a taste of what is to come. Even if it's about your OC, the story should be able to stand on its own without having to tie it back to yourself.
Dr. Wolf did a pretty good story about his OC (here) that you might take a look at, especially the summary. See if you could make changes to your summary that would make it less of a meta commentary and more of a narrative.