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This story is a sequel to Lessons Signed in Triplicate


Mr. Hayseed Greenhooves finds the element of kindness back in the Princesses Private Gardens several weeks after the gala. But she has no place here now.

This story is part three of the series "Sharing the Consequence Cake" and is preceeded by "Lessons signed in Triplicate" and "Apologetic Notes in G Flat" They can be read in any order.

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Very good. Glad to see this continued. And yes, Fluttershy should go.

8675120
Glad you enjoyed it! This was a pain in the ass to write but I'm glad i finally managed to finish it.

Firstly, how are the rest coming, if there are any more? Secondly, do you think this should go in the Accusation Fic Collection?

8810083
I'm not certain what the Accusation Fic Collection is so *shrug*

And I'm not really writing right now. My dad passed away last month so everything is kinda on hold for the moment. I have an idea for rarity and I've known what I want to do with twilight from the start ( although she has to be last by necessity) i do plan to finish at... some point, but there's kind of a lot going on right now.

8818631
First of all, I'm sorry to hear about your father. I understand that sometimes, life makes it hard to write. Look at the one story I've got posted; I started it when I was in college, and I've been working second shift the last couple years after graduating. As you can see, I've had trouble finding the time and motivation to continue it, though I plan to.

Second, the Accusation Fic Collection is a group on this site for stories that address the misdeeds of some of the characters that aren't addressed in the show. For example, stories that address how Luna was treated in "Luna Eclipsed," or how "Lesson Zero" affected Twilight. Applejack yelling at Twilight during Winter Wrap-Up, how Dash, Rarity and AJ acted during the Applewood Derby, the Wonderbolts' actions during "Rainbow Falls," "Rarity Investigates," and "Newbie Dash," and of course, the infamous Wedding/Changeling Invasion and Anon-A-Miss incidents are also present. Basically, it's a group for stories that call out characters on their bad choices, wrongful actions and hurtful words. Not unlike what you do with these three stories. I think they'd fit right in the season 1 folder.

8819157
Thanks

And yeah that does sound like these would fit. I'll have to submit them. thanks for letting me know about the group! (Or not. I wonder how do you actually do that? It'd be pretty awesome tho)

Anymore in the series

Plus if you want to do all the mane six, I don't know if you can do twilight
Might be bias since she's my fave character but all she did in the episode was basically st and next to celestia and allow the guests to shake her hooves

8818631
Sorry about your dad as well, I can understand if you want to avoid writing after that

Good story you have here.

8823728
none written up yet. but i'll write them at some point.

8823750
I know and I have that in mind don't worry. ;P

8824700
You're welcome.

Loved your work on AO3, was surprised to see you were a member here since 2012. Glad to see you managed to get Fluttershy's story written, and I'm eager to see the other three. Keep up the good work.

8838288
oh thank you! It's a bit surprising to realize theres other people here that might have read me on AO3 :twilightblush: I'm glad you enjoy my work. I'm working on rarity next but with everything going on in my life i'll make no promises on the time frame other than "at some point in time"

Nice work.

8965362
You're welcome.

I 've read the previous stories in this series, and am loving it.

I think you made the right choice showing Fluttershy as you did here.

Do you plan to do Rainbow Dash next? or Rarity?

9758992
It's slow going but I'm thinking It'll be Rarity. I'm so glad you are enjoying these!

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