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Love this, great material to read and maybe have a little fun with. Anyway, in the words of Jamison Fawkes, "I give it a 10!"
Nice and hot.
Probably should’ve been in present tense, honestly. It’s super awkward in past. Still hot, though.
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You're probably right. It felt a little awkward writing it too. But we'll see if I can be bothered to change it. Glad to hear it was hot anyway.
I'm not sure weather to cringe or allow myself to be aroused.
I'll go with both at the same time.
*UGGGGGHHHHH THAT'S SO FUCKING HOT.*
Ugh that's gross.
Me: Shut up Sweetie Belle let me have this.
Why is there a chapter 1 but it says it's complete
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Because I'm too lazy/busy masturbating to think of chapter titles.
Second person past tense is a little weird but, other than that, a nice and enjoyable fic. Good job!
Short, sweet and very Vinyl. I liked the bit of Lyra moon tossed in, too. Great stuff. One thing tho-" wound two now" should be 'round two now' I'm guessing.
I was gonna drop this a like, but it's at 69, so...