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RarityEQM


Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

Comments ( 21 )

Such a cute love story

Step three: Repeat step two

Wow! Well done, Lady Rarity! I liked how her own urges foiled here plans and left Shining in control...at least for now!

Looking forward to more of this sexy, vengeful tale!:raritywink:

Its good aside from some grammar errors (how does one grin quietly?) As long you dont add in some pegging it should be fine

8678597
Wow, do I have bad news for you. :P

8678780
pegging is delightful and I hope there will be lots of it <3

It's been quite awhile. And i must say, your skills have not diminished in the slightest.

Very strong writing for 'just porn'. I like it.

Somehow, I hope Chrysalis slides more and more into a submissive role with Shining Armor, all while mentally ranting about her glorious plans for revenge. Jeering that she 'finally has him where she wanted him', which turns out is her bent over his knee for a spanking. Things like that.

8679192
Don't get ahead of me!!! :duck:

8679736
Nothing like a proud Queen reveling in a submissive role. In denial of how she acts and continuously asserting that she is in control while begging to be satisfied

Kinky. And cute. Need more!

8844052
I'd love to when I've the time! :P

I read that tag as "cock holding."

9504173
...Well she does that too, so you're not wrong.

Hard to say who has the power here or if they're both slaves to lust. Interesting.

Also hot.

9504525
...you're making me want to continue this story darling, even after I've obviously given up on it. :heart:

9504608
Well, maybe for you, darling. :raritywink:

Geez this is interesting
oh
Well still this was pretty interesting
I kind of like the ... immorality of it.
Shining Having this hidden Relationship that 'could' ruin his relationship with Cadance, and Chrysalis losing herself to the love that Shining is providing her; making her to WANT to love and be loved.
I think a cool twist could have been if Cadance just knew.
She loves Shining Armor, but noticed after marrying him.
What ever power she has that senses love notices that there was something new after the wedding; a link to another person.
Maybe she hated it in the beginning or is still hating it...
You know what ima stop here
Love your stuff Rarity *kisses*

Ah, ponies. Always killing their enemies with kindness. Or in this case with lust. I would love to see more of this story, if you were to return to writing it. ^^

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