Discord thinks it would be most amusing if he made it rain poison joke on April foals day.
If only he remembered that he himself was not immune.
"Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the Moon"
Discord thinks it would be most amusing if he made it rain poison joke on April foals day.
If only he remembered that he himself was not immune.
This story is genius
Thanks !!!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
PERFECTION![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
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Thanks for the feedback !
They really should have brought back the poison jokes in later episode. I miss Appletiny.
This looks like a fun story. I'll keep track of this to see where it goes.
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A new chapter is in progress! Thank you for the feedback!
Did you perhaps mean “flock,” by any chance?
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Pretty much, yeah.
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Your story has a lot of potential, but you’re just sort of rushing through it. It’s more of an expanded outline at the moment. Rather than write new chapters, you might want to think about going back over these early ones and fleshing things out a bit.
Thanks for the feedback, i wi tr an work on it in the future. This is my first fanfic EVER so dont hate on me too mcuh pls![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
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I know how it is. I'm writing my first fic, too.
You do know fillies are girls right?
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oops. ill fix that.
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I am reading it currently and it's quite good. I really like the idea
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Just for future reference:
Foal = Child or baby horse. It technically should mean baby, but the show often classes the school age ponies as foals, as well. You can also simply call them children.
Filly = A young girl horse.
Colt = A young boy horse.
And thanks for reading my story.
Oh no.
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!! I DON CARE IF THIS IS THE FIRST STORY U HAVE EVER WRITTEN, IT IS AMAZING AND I WANT MORE!