Two years later
It was as warm and clear a day as any Ponyville could hope to see. Not a cloud was in sight, and the sunlight made Twilight’s castle glitter and shine in dozens of clear, iridescent colors within its crystal walls. Down below the castle, ponies milled about the town square, going about their business as on any other day. While vibrant, there was nothing unusual happening, and the markets saw only slightly busier throngs of ponies coming, going, and spending their hard-earned bits. And at the edge of the square, standing clean and proud in the place it had occupied since time out of mind, was Sugarcube Corner.
The rebuilt shop had been raised with enormous slabs of warm, brown stone, only a little taller than it had been before, but with a few extra wings added to give the family within more living space. Although the stone had been laid as seamlessly and with as much expertise as only generations of rock farmers could bring, there were a few incongruous spots standing out in its facade. Here and there, little scraps of old wooden walls stood, blended with mortar and stone as cleanly as could be managed. Even so, at the edges of most of those older walls, ponies could still spot faded scorch marks from where the fire had torn away the old building.
Naturally, the Pies had offered to remove the old walls completely, but Carrot and Cupcake had asked if they could be worked into the new structure instead. When asked why, Cupcake would only say that it seemed important. Now, those old sections still remained, almost invisible, but still clear as scars, never to fully fade away. They were almost like permanent reminders of everything that had gone before, as steadfast as the memories that would always be with the ponies who had endured those times.
For her part, Starlight couldn’t decide if the implications were grim or poetic. All in all, though, she supposed it was at least fitting.
“It’s hard to believe how far they’ve come,” Princess Cadence said, following Starlight’s eyes to the Corner.
“I think I’ve only recently started to relax a little, as far as all that’s concerned,” Starlight agreed. “It was touch and go for months. There were days when I thought it really was going to fall apart, even after all the effort they went to.”
“Wounds like that take so much longer to heal than ponies think. And I’ve never seen circumstances to make it so hard as theirs. I confess, I’m relieved too.”
“None of us could have done it without you,” Starlight said, giving Cadence a small smile. “I don’t think I’ve ever heard of a counselor as devoted as the one you recommended.”
“Even the strongest among us sometimes need the expertise of others. I’m only glad that it seems to have worked out. They will have trials ahead of them for the rest of their lives, but I think they will make it now. The darkest days are finally behind them.” She turned back to Starlight and returned her smile. “But that’s beside the point, isn’t it?”
Starlight gave Cadence a look of exaggerated annoyance. “No, nothing’s changed between me and Sunburst.”
“Why not?” Cadence pouted.
“It’s just never seems like the right time,” Starlight sighed. “Something’s always coming up either in the Empire or here with Twilight. Life’s kept us busy. And to tell you the truth, I think we’re comfortable with the way things are. Maybe one day, it’ll feel right to grow things a little closer. We’re not in any rush.” She gave a small laugh and shook her head. “Besides, Pumpkin just started magic kindergarten. What with his regular duties and traveling between the Empire and here to see her, he’s not going to have any time to spare for me.”
“Well, if you’re both happy, it’s not really my business to pry,” Cadence admitted primly. “But if I can be that annoying friend for just a little bit longer, don’t take anything for granted too much. It always seems like we have all the time in the world, but we really never know when all the chances will suddenly be gone.”
“I think we understand that better than most,” Starlight said, giving the Corner another glance. Then they lapsed into silence for a little while, making their way back to Twilight’s castle.
“On that note,” Cadence asked carefully, “How are Applejack and Hoops? I was so sad to hear things didn’t work out between them after all.”
“They’re doing alright, as far as I can tell,” Starlight said. “Hoops is always close by in the off season, and he swings by every chance he gets when the team is within train or flying distance. It’s a good thing, too. He’s about the only pony who can keep up with Pound. That little colt is getting more and more reckless when Hoops is away, from what Cupcake tells me. He’s going to be a hoof-ful for a long time to come.”
“No doubt,” Cadence chuckled. “Has he been seeing anypony else in the meantime?”
“Not that I’ve heard,” Starlight shrugged. “Applejack’s seeing someone new though.” She gave Cadence a sly look. “You’re not going to believe who.”
“Who?” Cadence asked, unable to conceal her curiosity.
She really won’t ever quite grow up, Starlight thought with a wry grin. Cadence looked more like a schoolfilly eager for gossip than an Equestrian Princess. “Fleetfoot.”
“Fleetfoot?” Cadence asked, brows shooting up incredulously. “From the Wonderbolts?”
“The one and only,” Starlight laughed.
“Okay, no, you’re right. I would not have guessed that one. How in Equestria did that come about?”
“So, I guess AJ had caught Soarin’s eye at some point, and he asked Rainbow Dash to set something up where they could run into each other,” Starlight explained. “Well, you know Rainbow Dash. She went and set up this sort of community charity event where ponies could race against the Wonderbolts, and she basically dared Applejack that she couldn’t even beat the trainees in a ground race.” Starlight couldn’t help giggling a little as she remembered the event. “Long story short, bad idea. Applejack didn’t just leave the recruits behind, she ran Soarin and everypony else into the dust.”
“I’m not sure I can say I’m surprised,” Cadence laughed. “What did Rainbow Dash think would happen?”
“Not a total shutout like that, I guess. Apparently, Fleetfoot took it especially hard, so she hunted Applejack down afterward for a bit of trash talk or something. Next thing everypony knew, they were dating.”
“Huh… go figure,” Cadence said.
“Yeah. So far, they seem pretty happy together. I guess only time will tell.”
“I suppose it will,” Cadence agreed. “She does seem drawn to competitive types though, doesn’t she?”
“Apparently,” Starlight laughed.
They reached the castle and parted ways inside the foyer. Twilight had set the rest of the afternoon aside for Cadence’s visit, and though they had invited Starlight to join them at the spa and for coffee afterwards, she had declined. It seemed better for the two of them to have their time together, what with how rarely the chance for purely social visits came along. Instead, she made her way to her own rooms, shutting the door behind her as she made her way to the small desk she had set up beneath the window.
Let’s see, she mused, pulling out a drawer and scanning the scattered pages piled up inside. Stages eight and nine of Intrepid’s Incantation of Insight still need the snags worked out of them. Or, The Curse of Eternal Chattering, that one backfired pretty horribly. And there’s always the re-cataloging of the library’s nonfiction. The architectural and archeology sections have been getting especially crowded lately… Yep, there’s plenty to do.
She pulled out Intrepid’s Incantation and gave it a cursory glance as she tried to decide what she felt most up to tackling. As she passed over task after task, though, she started to realize she was already feeling cooped up. She had settled into her work at the castle years ago, but every now and then, she still felt the need to get out and break the routine—and maybe a few nonessential rules—every now and then. As she put the jobs away and pondered what activities she might be in the mood for, she found herself thinking back on her conversation with Cadence.
“It always seems like we have all the time in the world, but we really never know when all the chances will suddenly be gone.”
She frowned, annoyed at how the thought seemed to nag at her, as if the nosy princess of love was still there in the room with her. Even so, she couldn’t help but feel her gaze drawn out over the town to Sugarcube Corner, standing just within sight in the center of town. Carrot and Cupcake might have mostly mended the rift between them over the years, thanks in no small part to their dedication and a good dose of professional guidance. Even so, Starlight still cringed to imagine how close it had all come to ending completely during those insane first days. Out of nowhere, Ponyville’s healthiest and happiest family had been thrown into the worst storm imaginable. It would take a special group of Tartarian demons to think of any worse troubles to throw at them than what they had endured.
Starlight closed the drawer and instead pulled out a clean sheet of stationary. Ink and quill came next, and before she could second-guess herself, she laid out her words in her clearest, most elegant magical script.
Dear Sunburst — I hope this finds you well, and that those Ice Pixies you mentioned have stopped harassing the barrier around the city. Nothing urgent’s been happening down here. I was just wondering if you’ll have any extra time next time you come down to visit…
The End.
This wrapped up rather smoothly and was a far nicer take on a silly fandom trope, only with actual reason behind it here. Nice job!
Last Chapter: Through trails and tribulations, Applejack and Hoops reunite as there bond becomes as strong as ever.
Epilogue: JK lol they broke up and we're not going to tell you why.
............wat?
Whoa 😮
I knew this story would have some ending for the set up, but dang! The story behind the story was something...
Underapeeciation review coming soon!
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You're welcome, and thank you very much for writing it; it explored things I've not often seen, at least done in this way. (One thing I can think of to say in more detail is that it seemed a very... mature story, as it were. The shapes the characters' lives were taking, the issues they were dealing with and the ways they were dealing with them... I'm not sure how to really clearly express it, but I do recall finding it nice.)
To be honest, I didn’t really have a lot of interest when I decided to read it, I was just looking for any fanfic involving sunburst (there are just not enough fanfics about him ). But then...wow...the story trapped me (is that the word?). I was always waiting for the next chapter. It was interesting, the descriptions and plot twists were great. Heck, everything was really good.
This is such a great story
So, I'm glad the end here did conclude with many potential issues moving forward being at least talked about, like how this ending is one where Carrot is the one that is making all the compromises, the one who has the most to lose to give everyone else a happy ending. And, indeed, a focus on his happiness over his responsibilities. And that the epilogue here does acknowledge that it wasn't a smooth process with everything.
It looks like in the end here the personal issues were deemphasized for the final confrontation of the two of them. Carrot's insecurity was only mentioned in the context of the past, and Cupcake's, well, there wasn't really a strong angle delivered for her own personal flaws in the first place. Instead the ending seemed to be more about what was wanted and the question as to whether or not they could move forward than what was going on below the hood.
I think I'm happy with the ending, though, generally. Definitely not an easy subject to tackle.
Sorta surprised that the process of inspiration of this went from a joke into a serious drama, though.
This was an overall good story. The ending seems too happy though, something like this and getting reminded repeatedly that Carrot got cucked with the two real fathers visiting . And then with Carrot's insecurities and the fact that he will never be a real father...yeah, all these things combined should have resulted in a break up no matter how good the counselor. Oh well.
This fic genuinely baffles me. It has just about every romantic drama cliche I can think of, trying to explain it to someone took almost ten minutes, the whole thing is basically about a marriage dispute, it's a genre I don't read much of in the first place.....and yet it's one of the single most engaging things I've ever read.
Even when the cliches happen, how everyone reacts to them is so real and so raw. The characters are so real and raw. The descriptions of emotions are pretty much exactly like what I hear in my worst times. The writing manages to convey that everyone and no one is really the Bad Guy and gives everyone time to both explain their perspective and see how the plot is affecting them. The way the secret spread felt natural and not forced, a rarity in itself going by my few experiences in the genre. I had a feeling how this would end, but I still felt genuine suspense after every chapter and have no idea how readers who were there from the start survived between updates. The resolution felt genuine, to my relief as I spent the whole story wondering if it would hold this incredible line. But it did, and I'm so amazed and so thankful it exists.
You, my friend, are a fucking artist.
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That just happens sometimes, for a variety of reasons that aren't all dramatic enough to warrant much attention. Plenty of epilogues jump over that stuff.
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I'm okay with them breaking up. It's just a bad felling of whiplash.
Though I can't tell if its from the writing or my taste in closure itself.
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That's fair. Emotion-based stuff seems to be particularly subjective in works like this
It is well-written, and nice but Applejack and Starlight, even Carrot's dad, basically everyone seems weirdly apathetic about Carrot Cake. Starlight seems to basically only care about Sunburst getting to see Pumpkin, and doesn't even once seem to express any care for the pain Carrot's been put through, and Applejack talks to basically everyone and tries to comfort them except Carrot. Even Carrot's dad, weirdly, seems to completely not care that Carrot's wife cheated on him with two Stallions and, in their conversation, seems to spend more time accusing Carrot of being to rash then giving any sort of critique of Cupcake at all.
Indeed, if I have one problem, its that other than himself, the story seems to spend almost no time actually making any character but Cupcake and Carrot (who then both by the end are forced to change their views) out as mistaken. Starlight spends virtually every conversation with Sunburst telling him he's too rough on himself, Applejack never once seems to even level a mild critique at Cupcake or Sunburst, and then Carrot gets lectured by both his father and Sunburst. Its weird since Carrot is so clearly the biggest of the actual adult victims here, having just been lied to for years and having his trust violated in awful ways, yet, to quote the earlier chapter, its almost as if the story is more concerned with making it Sunburst's sob story, and Starlight thinks the only important thing to be achieved is that Sunburst gets what he wants, forgetting about Carrot completely.
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“He would later die of a cold.”
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So what I’m getting from this is that Cupcake belongs to the streets and men can’t have shit in this world?
You can has review!
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Perhaps, but at least, Pinkie, as a Knight of Harmony, would get some sort of Royal Stipend, or Imminent Danger Pay, every time she goes on a Friendship Mission™.
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Do you know if Heteropaternal Superfecundation are real words?
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......yes, I do?