A Brony with a lot of ideas P.S Rainbow Dash is Best Pony ever, oh and Luna is best Princess YAY!
The events of the story take's place at the end of "Shadow play- part two"
At first Twilight dismissed her feelings for Fluttershy as just a really strong friendship, but after she realises that if the plan hadn't worked she would have lost Fluttershy forever and she soon begins to be by her side day and night but how can she tell the timid Pegasus pony that she.... Loves her
Will contain ScootaBelle in future chapters
Page generated in 0.115 seconds
Total duration
1,006 users online
1,464,233 hits today, 2,004,447 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Ohmygosh yes! This seems promising! Really sweet to read your first words on here and I'm really excited for this story and many others in the future. Just the fact that this is TwiShy is literally the best thing ever, even if I might be biased, heh, but this is super adorable with how you handled this and just these two areeeeeeeeeeeee <3 ahhhh. Welcome!!!!! Wooo, love thiss, MY HEART.
I HONESTLY WAS SO EXCITED WHEN I SAW THIS in the shipping folder
8752849
Thanks it'll keep getting better I hope
Aw this is cute and I'm loving this, keep up the good work!
8755398
Thanks I will
It's a bit all over the place time wise but otherwise it's a great story can't wait for the next chapter
8760437
yeah, i know i still have trouble with the time side of it at least everypony can still enjoy it
I loved it. Please tell me you're working in a sequel!
YEYYESYSEYSE OMG, HERE WE GO, THE MOST FLUFFIEST CHAPTER IN THE STORY RIGHT HERE. Always love when ponies finally get all fuzzy and adorable together and it always shows with these two! Definitely was an excitement to see a new chapter of this! Woo, loving the Luna & Spike dynamic in here and overall the interactions in general ahhhh
8783387
a_rodrigues42 yes i am and thanks
Way too rushed.
8876522
I'm still new to being an author but if i ever make a story similar to this i will try to slow down the tempo
What was in the letter?
8899247
I'm leaving that to everyponys imagination
other then some capitalization issues (like not capitalizing I and Starlights name) its good
Ah, good ol' Trollestia strikes again.
is it just me or does this make no sens "As everypony said goodbye and went back to there homes Scootaloo and her moms where about to go out to the park when Spike came running into the room with a letter for Twilight.
"Twi, you got a letter off the Princess's!" He said excitedly.
"Thank you Spike" Twilight replied calmly as she took the letter in her magical grasp and began to read it to herself, she smiled over at her Marefriend and Daughter before saying "I think we might have to go to the park tomorrow"
"AWWW, but i was looking forward to going!" Scootaloo sighed miserably."?
the ending felt a tad bit rushed
8946474
After rereading it my self i have found that you are right and am planing on rewriting it so that it does, so thanks for pointing it out for me
8969581
Gald to help.
Ahh yesssss, more of this is always good for me heart. You definitely added all the fluff in this one with the interactions, especially with Scootaloo. It's so very sweet awwwwwwww. Definitely love how it flows and comes together, then you having Celestia discussing with Twi & Fluttershy & ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, it's like the most cutest thing ever! The great thing with that is given their personalities it's close to how they would actually act and it just makes me gush so much with how you handled that. It's sweet having exploring other relationships too to give it more texture and world building, but yesss, any TwiShy moment I'll cherish and love sooooooooooo soo much in here with how you portray their working personalities with one another!!
it's very rushed, maybe work on the cohesion
8876692
no offense but please do
When the world needed them most, they returned.
SWEET!
11412178
, just needed a really long mental health break 
I'm going to try and update the story as much as possible from now one, hopefully 2 chapters per week from next week
11412185
Sure thing. Story updates aren't an excuse to ignore mental health