A young man named Tom Frim is mysteriously transported to Equestria, and he doesn't appear to have a way back home. But that's not even the worst of his problems, because now he's not a human anymore either, he's a pony! But wait, there's more!.. He's also no longer a he, he's now a she... Awkward.
Watch as Tom becomes the Mysterious Mare Do Well and fights against many evildoers. And maybe makes some friends.
(Now that may be a lighthearted description, but be warned, this story has a dark tag for a reason and some scenes may be a bit disturbing. Read at your own risk!
As for the cover art, all the credit goes to Wolfram-And-Hart on DeviantArt. Make sure to check out their work.
Also, as for the elephant in the metaphorical room, this is a reboot of a series I made a little while ago. This will have some changes, it'll have better writing, and it will have different perspectives for specific chapters. Without further ado, read on!)
Very promising.
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The Monk
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Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy!
don't like the idea that everything as all set up for her. just too convient that there is a place and computer all setup for her.
sorry this had a good idea but how it's executed is just not working for me.
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Fair enough, but I think it's obvious that everything being prepared for him is something I plan to address. If your problems are more to do with my writing style however, then sorry. I'm still learning how to do things better and learning takes time. I would gladly take any criticism though!
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I think it be more interesting for him/her to choose to become Mare Do Well instead of just assuming it.
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Of course, but that's not exactly what I'm going for. There are a good amount of Mare do Well stories aside from mine though, I'm sure that one of those do exactly what you described.
Thank you for trying my story though!
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Yeah, not finishing but no downvote.
I wish there are more MDW stories. Because i wanna see what it would be like if she was real and how Equestria would react