UPDATE- CURRENTLY UNDER A RE-WRITE
All characters are humanized, all in their early-mid twenties. But still hold their original descriptions.
Life. It has its twists and turns. Most of them are easily passed and we carry on with it. But some twist in life are not that simple.
Infact it can be even ruin the one you already live...
This is the story of Chris Townsend. He lived his simple life and went along with it. But something drastic was about to happen. And this was no ordinary sick twist...
One Afternoon, his whole world crumbles around him. His town is destroyed before his very eyes...
With no options, he flees for his life...
With no hope of turning back, Chris thought he had lost everything.
But, when someone finds him, He's given a second chance at life...
Like this idea of the Ponies as Humans and it actually working out, you sir, are a genius and I hope to see more chapters of this, I'm definitely favoriting this and following it. Also, if you ever need help with editing, just send me a message, I'm in the Pacific Time Zone btw.
MOAR.
The story itself looks intriguing, but can I recommend you have a friend glance it over shortly after/before you post? There are a lot of simple errors that need fixing that would probably bring you some more viewers.
Thanks for the story, looks good so far.
Thanks for pointing that out!
Good story so far, I hope to see more
This story needs one more thing, more chapters.
Please continue this story.
Are you still working on this I love this story!
I love this story, please continue with it!