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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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Spike looked like he was about to cry as he said in a petrified creak,“Wha… What happened to me!?”

Plot twist Spike, a Plot twist happens!

Wow what the fuck is up with the downvotes

I was gonna wait until the story was finished but i'm like "Aw what the hell might as well review it anyways!" the story description is perfect and goes beyond just a normal clop based fic.
Tokai - about the down votes? I'm not the author...
there just some people don't like m/m stories for it's not popular as f/f or f/m stories(Oh please...straight ships are predictable & boring as with girl on girl is overblown! but i don't fault anyone who does like that stuff anime or mlp ships)
note to the people who down vote and leave negative comments on stories just so you know...I'm not going to take shit from anyone! whenever my stories get out i'll fight back, been around enough to see/know how people are on here & yt when pestering mlp audio drama creators like disneyfanatic2364 with daughter of discord or Ashley H with remembrance for example they have real lives as well voice actors & authors! to sure we're clear https://youtu.be/Y7nmZJX8LyI or https://youtu.be/2elJYXrF69s "i'll track you down and then hit delete!"
p.s: i don't want this part of my message to come across as me being a white knight (I'M NOT! don't know them, they don't know me. i understand their struggles and hardships as a fellow author and creator of great story telling in any form.) Thank you:)

*sees the downvotes* they were born of the salt, one with the salt for they are SALTbornes

[FANGIRLY SCREECHING INTENSIFIES]

I absolutely love this chapter. spike's happiness and confidence (at his size!) was so cute. to quote aj in best night ever "ponies to don't wear clothes!" my take on it "dusk...dragons don't wear pants!" also loved r63 of prince cinder(princess ember) and the name has no resemblance to cynder from legend of spyro games, skylanders & skylanders academy on Netflix!
apple buck doesn't wanna share spike(sexually) with his pals...that's not normal or like him at all! it'll probably be explained in next chapter(whenever you get back to write more of this again.)
i'll be waiting;)

Well, that turned... not the direction I thought it would. I'm kind of glad it did, though- a lot of people tend to make a shift of dynamics in the bedroom into like flicking a light switch. You made the psychological effects, especially the anxiety and sudden identity crisis, very sympathetic and realistic.

This chapter went from wow kinda kinky to Oh My God!

I hope Buck realizes he can totally still be the dom... just switch the size play from, "Look at your tiny cock" to "How does it feel to have someone smaller than you ram your ass?" or something like that... If you don't go that way, completely understandable. I'll still love it anyway :3

Well that was emotional.
(just want you to know the comment isn't a dislike or anything.) totally didn't except it go that far. your story, rules and ect. that's what matters here:)

Hmm, nobody has review this chapter!? well i'm correcting that...
i'm glad it's updated and i waited for it. those guys are in happier understanding place!:)
p.s: i should point out this was supposed be sent two days ago but i went to sleep and when i woke up my laptop restarted itself...grr

Loooove the sequel so far and I'm so happy their relationship has turned better again!

And although I know it might go against the idea behind this story, I would love to see a chapter where the roles get reversed and Apple Buck fully worships Spike's huge cock and new masculinity. With a few passages scattered around, I think you're foreshadowing it? Well I want to say I put my (albeit meaningless) seal of approval on that!

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Let's just say the next chapter of this story is going to be rather enjoyable for both Spike and Apple Buck. ;)

So i'm bored and thought to myself "hm let's see whose story got an update." clicked on your name...randomly mind you! scroll going ooo here's that update he was talking about his posts!?
then looking at the chapter's title i'm like...Oh - My - God!
(here's my comments and question in live stream chat room)
thank you thank you for having a human version of spike in your story! is Lucy_E the r63 chat name of elusive? lol zephyr breeze is crushing on rainbow blitz...some things never change. sci-shine (that sounds so odd when said out loud) is interested in bestiality. i'm joking about the last one;) ooo now I want a fic of an almost r63 version (with exception of male flash sentry. cause number one for comedy sakes the idea of 'holy crap i'm gay or straight because i'm drawn to this guy I never met before!' or option number two have r63 version of bonnie be flash's younger sister who dated sunny before he going bad. then big bro flash gets angry or confrontational with sunny in the hallway pushing him into the lockers for hurting/breaking his little sister's heart!) Ya see what you do to me you give me ideas that I don't need!
btw one error in this 'it's by not my' i'm not gonna scroll back up to find it. that's it:)

When spike mentioned his bag I thought for sure it was a cock cage custom made for his... girth. Still, just as good as what i thought.

i'm so happy this story is finished! it's an amazing read.

Not bad at all. One thing though is that Spike is quite intelligent so he would know something is seriously bothering Buck.

Even if that was true, I… I don’t think that would explain why Apple Buck would act so distant afterward. I mean, I know he can be stubborn at times… especially when his pride is damaged, but… Something isn’t adding up…”

I would think Spike would have seen the connection himself.

The unicorn’s grin widened as he looked up at Spike mischievously. “You know what? That would be a great idea~ Don’t you think so, Spikey? I mean… If you’re not gonna use that big cock of yours properly, you might as well lock it away~ I bet I can find a cage strong enough to make sure it never grows hard again. Heck… maybe it’ll cause that thing to shrink a little...”

That actually sounds like a legitimately good idea. It would help Buck with his inferiority complex, make Spike feel more submissive and also be a very heavy disincentive for Buck to try bottoming again. They should really get one for him. It would be really hot as well to have a member much larger than yours locked up and under your control.

I was kinda hoping he would put Spike into chastity. It just sounds like a REALLY hot idea to me. Having absolute power over something bigger than yourself.

I think having a cock less than an inch would be a little too impractical in terms of clothing and also peeing. I also would think they would only make a permanent decision like that when more sober and only after a very long talk and a lot of thought.

I for the life of me cannot figure out who DinkY-WinkY is.

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