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AJ and flutters leading into something more than just interrogating is kinda funny

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The idea came from another story... I hope the author, or someone who read the fic, realize this after reading one of the character's name.

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If it's blue sky, I don't know.
As for the others, I don't know either. Although I do like the clever /ss/ thing you did with Sissy Pea.

Let's go boys.

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heyyyy, that is a nice comment.

Great chapter. Man do I love these series. I can't wait to see what is next. It was interesting to see the contrast between AJ and Shy's visions of time with Spike. AJ wanted something where she was a bit more dominating but more of a trading between the two. But Shy she seem to give off alot of hints she is far more into being dominated and wanting to be owned by our dragon friend lol. I wonder what the other girls think along the lines of Spike. And best chance seeing how his desire and hunger for sexual pleasure could have been awakened who knows what he will end up doing now that he is more than likely a loaded double barrel shotgun ready to knock up as many mares as he can lol.

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Thanks for the comment. I will do my best to please everyone in the next part. Just a little heads-up: the next part in the series will have two chapters, one featuring comedy and randomness, and the other... well... more lewd shenanigans :pinkiecrazy:

Applejack's interrogation honestly had me dying.😂
However on the flip side. Fluttershy's interrogation had me afraid for my fucking life, and Twilight's confirmation didn't help.... Now I'm shook. Cause I've realized that all of the main 6 have probably raped Spike at some point. Well maybe besides Twilight. She does have feelings for Spike that was just a given, based off the ending of the pervious story. Hell I kinda even figured all the main 6 would like/ be infatuated with Spike, and they where just going to wait till he became an adult. Which is why I thought Twilight was so mad at Starlight. But, now I'm just lost and confused............ This was a great story, and a fun read. :applejackunsure:But, please for one remember this. Of all the Main 6 Fluttershy is the one that you have to worry about the most:derpyderp2:. The 3 most dangerous characters of the main six is Pinkie Pie:pinkiecrazy:, Twilight Sparkle:twilightoops:, and Fluttershy:flutterrage:. Pinkie Pie is a give in cause she's the most dangerous. Then when you take in the fact that she's :pinkiegasp:fucking Crazy + She Can Pops Up:pinkiehappy: Where Ever You Are= Fucking Cupcakes:pinkiesick:. Twilight Sparkle because she's the most powerful. :twilightblush:Magic + Mental Instability= :twilightangry2:Mad Scientists Twilight. Now then we finally get to the third, and technically the most troublesome one Fluttershy:fluttercry:. The stare is a very broken and dangerous ability that Fluttershy can use whenever she wants. We've seen the stare used in a couple of ways. One to control/calm down :fluttershysad: overly aggressive animals. Two to corner a fully grown mad adult :moustache:dragon, that she was scared witless :fluttershbad: of mind you. Finally to counter act or fight back against the Cockatrise, that was turning her to stone. Most people agree that the stare may put the target into a state of hypnosis.:fluttercry: This was sorta in forced by the whole staring down a dragon fiasco; where the stare showed obvious signs of Mood Alteration:applejackconfused:. It is unkownk if the effects of the stare was weakened because the subject was a dragon:moustache:, but we can tell some slight differences between the sentient Dragon:moustache: and Fluttershy's animal :raritystarry: friends. One with her animals when Fluttershy uses :fluttershysad: the stare it seems like they have little to no choice but to do what she wants. Which is why she doesn't like using it because she feels like it restricts their freedom, but with the dragon it was different.:fluttershyouch: He didn't just freeze while looking into her eyes like some kind of lost or scolded dog. He lost the aggressive/agitated air that he previously had. :ajsleepy:However he could still talk back and try to reason with Fluttershy. Now my theory is that due to the Dragons size, age, and internal magic power:eeyup:. The effects of Fluttershy's stare where slightly weakend. This is also backed up when she stares down the Cockatrise. Due to it's magic it was able to turn Fluttershy partially to stone. :trollestia:Before it was subdued. I say all of that to explain this. If Fluttershy wanted to do something to you. All she'd have to do is make eye :rainbowhuh:contact, and then boom you're completely helpless.:facehoof: She dosn't have to drug you, get you drunk, or trick you. Just one look in your eyes, and your life is in her hands:raritydespair:. The only way you'd even stand half a chance is if you where more powerful than a adult dragon. Or as powerful as Discord:twilightblush: cause he is the only charecter to date to just shrug off the stare. And that's why Fluttershy's interrogation had me afraid for my fucking life:applecry:. She dosn't even have to drug Spike. That and it reminded me of this one fanfic I read where Fluttershy used the stare to rape Spike. :unsuresweetie:. And that snippet gave me flashbacks.

I'm more interested in seeing just how Celestia deals with Twilight abusing her power in sending random ponies to Pony Hell over small--well maybe not small, but easily handledsituations like this. She can't be very happy if her former student is sending ponies to Tartarus just because she feels like it.

This was just kind of random, and I'm not really sure it counts as a sequel. The smut was nice. And Starlight and Trixie are fun mares to be around. 6/10!:moustache:

Disclaimer: all the mares and little dragons involved in this story are of legal age.

And that's 12, right?

Okay. This made less sense than the last one.:rainbowderp:

Hey, it's up!

I really did have a great time reading this. I didn't realize until a quarter of the way through that I had read another story of yours ("That was not what I meant!") and that's why it sounded so familiar. Both of them were fantastic.

I can't wait to see what other stories you think up. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, there will be more fics coming from me, just give me some time and healthy amounts of the tea and coffee.

I can't help myself but love how kind is this fandom sometimes. I know I already said but,
thanks again for helping my story.


8679699 in a good way, bad way, or lewd way?

“You left Spike, my young dragon, all by himself, in the only place where the entire population wants to bang him?”

Including the stallions?

So... practically every mare that has caught sight and scent of Spike's male anatomy becomes lust-addled, wanting nothing more than to have sex with him, and the only reason there aren't dozens -- maybe even hundreds -- of pony-dragon hybrids is because of Twilight Sparkle...

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Hey, not all heroes wear cape after all.
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Even the royal guards.

Just tells it like it is: The Mane 6, Starlight, Trixie, and even Maud wants to ride on Spike's double dragons!!!

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In a 'what just happened and why?' way.:applejackconfused:

I don’t know what’s funnier, that Twilight “grounds” Starlight in Tartarus, or how casual Starlight is about the whole thing.

:moustache: Twilight why didn't you stop this ?
:twilightsheepish:SCIENCE THINGIES!
:raritystarry: Thingies is right my dear
:flutterrage: Behold my buttery goodness!
:pinkiegasp: Maud!?! what's with the buckets?
:ajbemused: Winona wants her fair share too
:rainbowlaugh: Every mare gets Spike
:trollestia: of course they do, How do you expect me to keep Equestrias herd under my hoof!
:moustache: How do you rape the willing???

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So... those uhh... those interrogations. Yeah... okay. So all of the main seven, excluding Rarity and Rainbow Dash, all had a taste of Spike. Okay. Fine. I am alright with this. HOWEVER! Is no one going to say anything about the fact of SS being a wife and getting it on with Spike? I find nothing wrong with it. Just surprised it hasn't been talked about.

P.S. yes Twilight has fucked Spiked.

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Why would you say that? ss is a model mare, A mártir of the community; just like his husband sea pea.

Dorothy Drill, taht kcarc em pu!!!! iT wAs :rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

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I think I just broke you. Where is the restart button?


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At the beginning it wasn't going to be a sequel. But the idea of the final scene was perfect for a set up to a third part.


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Heyyy you just gave me another idea, Thanks.


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Perfect. Unfortunately, the third part will make more sense
...
Unless...

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Oh god, I never made the connection with her nickname being "Ss" until I read this comment.

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I saw it too. Pinkie wiped something sticky and white from SS's lower lip. Obviously she sucked off Spike before Twilight and others arrived. And it was his cum, because her husband was out, and she's not a baker.

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I still don't get it.

Post-Weimar Republic Germany reference? That's the only 'Ss' I can think of, outside of Skyward Sword...

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Ok. Well, hopefully he'll be awake for the fun this time!:trollestia:

Nice to see someone else helping me lift the Spike mantle.

Pretty good. Here's to hoping for a quick sequel.

And Spike has to deal with this shit constantly? Jeez.

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boy, how do I wish I could have less work on my schedule. Little Spike deserves some action!


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Once I get done with the two-faced charade thingy, I'll start writing the third fic (probably the last one) of this series.

Congrats on another feature! Glad to have helped!

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TLDR: Fluttershy is OP

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Holy shit, you literally used most of the icons in one single paragraph...good job:moustache:

LOL, well looks like the mane six are a bunch of possessive girlfriend that hate to share their dragon, or his spunk which they all seem very familiar with. Well at least Twilight, Pinkie, Fluttershy, Applejack seem to know, kind of wonder what Rarity and Rainbow dash have done with the little guys. Maybe put some clues in the sequel?

Anyway this was a fun read and another good spike story and I can't wait to see what Maud has planned.

...though with how many times Spike is in this situation I wonder if he's completely aware and if he's fine getting jerked off/crushing puss and also if the Cutiemark crusaders, aged up or no is up to you, took a page out of their older sisters book and played "Doctor" with spike...my mind seems to be going into bad places, :pinkiecrazy:

anyway good job and I look forward to the next one!:pinkiehappy:

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😆Thx fam I tried😆.

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😆LoL. That would be rad bruh.😹

Holy shit. This series is just too good, props to ya mate. Can't wait for the third part :moustache:

What episode is the cover art from?

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"the times they're changeling" from season 6 episode 16. :moustache:

Very interesting and am looking forward to the next part.

Most excellent.

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