Those Ponies, believe that they are superior, that I was trying to hurt them. No, no matter what I am blamed for, no matter who much they want be to leave, I will stay and protect them. I lost my old home I'm not losing this one.
So....If Jaylen is the Gentle Darkness incarnate, then I guess that one of the climaxes of this story is going to be full power Jaylen versus full power Celestia as Avatar of the Light.
8675867 Nope, Celestia isn't the avatar of light just very heavily influenced, either next chapter or the chapter after that I will have Celestia talking with the avatar of the Light.
Also Jaylen can destroy Celestia in a second, if she fought full power.
8676071 What would you expect, the character is literally Darkness itself nothing besides the Light of Destruction comes close to her power. Tirek at full power would be an ant to her.
8676123 which is one reason why I usuually avoid fics like this you know what to expect the guy just does what they want with no repercusions because they can just obliterate everything in there way it gets really boring really fast
8676136 Except the difference between those kinds of character and Jaylen is that she knows that actions have consequence, so she actively limits herself unless absolutely necessary or the Light of Destruction is involved.
8676162 Harmony is good, well tries to be, Harmony does not want to be like her creator but still has a bit of the Light of Destructions mindset not enough to try to enslave a race but enough to make her rush things and do the wrong thing. And Yubel was only evil because she was corrupted by the Light of Destruction, but BEFORE that she was sent into space, that never happened here. And Jaylen is a girl, hence the title The Supreme Queen not The Supreme King, I don't know what her voice would sound like though.
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I personally think this Queen here is too good in a way. She is always having the morale highground with Celestia being completely corrupt. She also seems to beat everything without any trouble. It makes the reading experience a tad dull I think since there isn't any challenge or complication.
8679228 As I have been stating she is very, VERY, powerful and that's because she hasn't gotten in a true fight yet, once the Light of Destruction comes around then that will change completely. And you think that she is too good, she is the latest reincarnation of multiple Gentle Darkness, they're bodies get destroyed all of the time and the Light has one to. The Gentle Darkness is, while seen as evil and destructive, is the true force of good in this universe, while the Light of Destruction is the very opposite. She was raised to do good and took those lessons to heart, she could have been a tyrant but wasn't, she did make some very bad decisions though. Some of those decisions now permanently effect Equestria, one of them resulted in Equestria even being founded.
Edit: Celestia is corrupted by the Light and is a puppet, she can be saved if the mastermind is destroyed or the Light is removed from her. The real mastermind is hiding in plain sight just waiting to attack.
I can’t wait for what the mare will find out the ture of the Gentle Darkness and the past. when you gonna update chapter so I can read to find out? and also they the mare6 learn the turse of princess Celestia past and about The Light of Destruction and what really happen to turn luna into nightmare moon.
8688682 I have a bunch of school work to finish, plus I have a vacation planned with my family for the end of the semester. So to answer your question on when this is going to be updated, most likely about 2 weeks to a month from now.
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New Chapters up.
So....If Jaylen is the Gentle Darkness incarnate, then I guess that one of the climaxes of this story is going to be full power Jaylen versus full power Celestia as Avatar of the Light.
8675867
Nope, Celestia isn't the avatar of light just very heavily influenced, either next chapter or the chapter after that I will have Celestia talking with the avatar of the Light.
Also Jaylen can destroy Celestia in a second, if she fought full power.
as entertaining as this is i will track it despite the mane character being op op
8676071
What would you expect, the character is literally Darkness itself nothing besides the Light of Destruction comes close to her power. Tirek at full power would be an ant to her.
8676123
which is one reason why I usuually avoid fics like this you know what to expect the guy just does what they want with no repercusions because they can just obliterate everything in there way it gets really boring really fast
8665067
I thought the EoH were, you know, good. And isn't Yubel evil? If Jaylen was voiced, what would he sound like?
8676136
Except the difference between those kinds of character and Jaylen is that she knows that actions have consequence, so she actively limits herself unless absolutely necessary or the Light of Destruction is involved.
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which is a good bit of why i'm tracking it to see how it plays out with her limiting herself
8676162
Harmony is good, well tries to be, Harmony does not want to be like her creator but still has a bit of the Light of Destructions mindset not enough to try to enslave a race but enough to make her rush things and do the wrong thing. And Yubel was only evil because she was corrupted by the Light of Destruction, but BEFORE that she was sent into space, that never happened here. And Jaylen is a girl, hence the title The Supreme Queen not The Supreme King, I don't know what her voice would sound like though.
I personally think this Queen here is too good in a way. She is always having the morale highground with Celestia being completely corrupt. She also seems to beat everything without any trouble. It makes the reading experience a tad dull I think since there isn't any challenge or complication.
8679228
As I have been stating she is very, VERY, powerful and that's because she hasn't gotten in a true fight yet, once the Light of Destruction comes around then that will change completely. And you think that she is too good, she is the latest reincarnation of multiple Gentle Darkness, they're bodies get destroyed all of the time and the Light has one to. The Gentle Darkness is, while seen as evil and destructive, is the true force of good in this universe, while the Light of Destruction is the very opposite. She was raised to do good and took those lessons to heart, she could have been a tyrant but wasn't, she did make some very bad decisions though. Some of those decisions now permanently effect Equestria, one of them resulted in Equestria even being founded.
Edit: Celestia is corrupted by the Light and is a puppet, she can be saved if the mastermind is destroyed or the Light is removed from her. The real mastermind is hiding in plain sight just waiting to attack.
I can’t wait for what the mare will find out the ture of the Gentle Darkness and the past. when you gonna update chapter so I can read to find out? and also they the mare6 learn the turse of princess Celestia past and about The Light of Destruction and what really happen to turn luna into nightmare moon.
8688682
I have a bunch of school work to finish, plus I have a vacation planned with my family for the end of the semester. So to answer your question on when this is going to be updated, most likely about 2 weeks to a month from now.
okay, not mad just as we said “family first” and I hope you have good time and luck your semester and school work
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