Great chapter. I liked how you reaffirmed Rainbow's genuine love for Twilight. It helped send home the fact that Rainbow knows what her and Twilight are doing is just fun and games and that there are certain lines that shouldn't be crossed. I also liked the rules you forced Trixie to abide by, it also helps drive home the fact that it's all just for fun and that Trixie wasn't allowed to just take full advantage of Twilight.
9291973 Thank you very much for saying this. I was really nervous about people rejecting this chapter due to the temporary departure from lewd acts to this corny, cheesy, lovey-dovey stuff.
9292002 Same goes for you, bud. Thanks for reading and commenting.
She could feel the beginnings of a stress headache coming along
I've been there.
So why would Trixie, Twilight’s self-proclaimed nemesis, willingly have sex with her?
Hatefucking? And I think it's less hate and more she enjoys riling your up.
“Sup, nerd?” said Rainbow casually, laying on her back with her hands behind her head. “Miss me much?”
Hello Rainbow Dash.
“Fuck the rules. Are you mad?” asked Rainbow. “I’m not asking if I broke any rules or if I did anything wrong. I’m asking if you’re mad.”
GOOD.
“Yeah, she seemed like she was laying it on a bit thick. Alright, that settles it. Trixie is out.”
Smart move.
“No one calls my girl dumb but me.”
Fair enough I guess.
She pointed to the ground, where a beautiful picnic scene waited. A basket of food, a nice picnic blanket, a bucket of ice in which sat a bottle of Twilight’s favorite white wine, and, most importantly, a small collection of books. Rainbow grinned at Twilight’s surprised expression, then began flapping her wings to bring their cloud down to the ground.
Very nice, Rainbow.
“So… I’m guessing I fucking nailed this one, right?” asked Rainbow. Twilight giggled, then wrapped her arms around Rainbow, hugging her tightly and giving her another quick kiss.
OH yeah.
“Psh! Is it done? Does the Great Trixie strike you as some sort of amateur, Rainbow Dash?” scoffed Trixie. “If it wasn’t finished, I wouldn’t be here.”
What did you do?
“Starlight is a bit… Tied up, at the moment.” Trixie giggled a sinister, devious giggle. “She’s going to want to meet with Twily soon, by the way. She’s not allowed to cum until she can do it in the princess’ mouth. Hope you don’t mind.”
Hm...
“Not something we’re likely to say by accident. Plus, Pinkie wouldn’t stop saying it last week, it got stuck in my head. The word doesn’t matter. It’s the rules you need to pay attention to.”
You know what, that's fair.
“This thing we do is for fun and, at the end of the day, you’ve got your woman and I’ve got mine. If you do anything that makes things not fun for my woman, I’ve got no problem sending you both home with blue balls.”
Joke's on you, Trixie's already blue.
“The instructions are inside. Shouldn’t give you any trouble but, if it does, come see Starlight. She should be able to fix any problems with the charm.”
I hope so.
“Of course. Teleports it right into your hand. Enchanted the bottle, too. Should be nigh-impossible to break.”
Smart move.
Namely, planning how best to use her new catalyst.
Should be interesting.
I swear, there will be sexy fun times in the next chapter. Scout's honor.
9302599 Nah, I feel, it's just that I've had something similar happen (not exactly the same, but enough that it hits hard) and that dude was an absolute asshole about it.
So really, my comment is me saying "Good shit. Fuck Trixie for reminding me of bad memories."
9323386 well thanks for the reply and i love mind break and stuff alike i just adore how you do it can't wait to see what's next and who's next to also you ever write anything for white kitten i think you could do it great
p.s. would love to see you do more daddy daughter incest
9292163 I'm always down for boundary/emotional affirmation chapters, especially with harder kink stories like this one. Knowing some of your other stuff, there's still a part of me that's afraid there's gonna be a bad end, but IIRC, you've exempted this story from your usual soul-rendingly bleak endings in an older comment.
Though I am curious as to how you'll eventually wrap this all up.
Great chapter. I liked how you reaffirmed Rainbow's genuine love for Twilight. It helped send home the fact that Rainbow knows what her and Twilight are doing is just fun and games and that there are certain lines that shouldn't be crossed. I also liked the rules you forced Trixie to abide by, it also helps drive home the fact that it's all just for fun and that Trixie wasn't allowed to just take full advantage of Twilight.
This might be my favorite chapter in the whole thing as far as the Dash and Twi relationship goes.
9291973
Thank you very much for saying this. I was really nervous about people rejecting this chapter due to the temporary departure from lewd acts to this corny, cheesy, lovey-dovey stuff.
9292002
Same goes for you, bud. Thanks for reading and commenting.
I've been there.
Hatefucking? And I think it's less hate and more she enjoys riling your up.
Hello Rainbow Dash.
GOOD.
Smart move.
Fair enough I guess.
Very nice, Rainbow.
OH yeah.
What did you do?
Hm...
You know what, that's fair.
Joke's on you, Trixie's already blue.
I hope so.
Smart move.
Should be interesting.
Were you even ever a scout to begin with?
I appreciate this, it’s a good “reset” on the relationship and makes it feel real. I think it was a much needed chapter.
Awww, this is so sweet I agree with those below, this chapter was a good idea!
Good shit. Fuck Trixie.
9302272
Aww, don't be like that. Deep down, she really likes Twilight and admires her abilities. She just has an odd way if showing it
9302599
Nah, I feel, it's just that I've had something similar happen (not exactly the same, but enough that it hits hard) and that dude was an absolute asshole about it.
So really, my comment is me saying "Good shit. Fuck Trixie for reminding me of bad memories."
A chapter without lewd is actually quite refreshing. Loved it!
so is it done? because it still says incomplete
9302599
9322993
I'm not sure I follow the logic here. It's marked as incomplete, has had no definitive ending, and has just been updated like 2 weeks ago.
What makes you think it's done?
9323015
well i assumed after care so i might have just thought it was finished and a bit tired sorry but love your work
9323384
No worries, gb, just know this: I've still got a bit of this story to tell, and you'll all *know* exactly when it ends
9323386
well thanks for the reply and i love mind break and stuff alike i just adore how you do it can't wait to see what's next and who's next to also you ever write anything for white kitten i think you could do it great
p.s. would love to see you do more daddy daughter incest
9292163
I'm always down for boundary/emotional affirmation chapters, especially with harder kink stories like this one. Knowing some of your other stuff, there's still a part of me that's afraid there's gonna be a bad end, but IIRC, you've exempted this story from your usual soul-rendingly bleak endings in an older comment.
Though I am curious as to how you'll eventually wrap this all up.