Prologue-CURSED BANDICOOTS
Prologue
CURSED BANDICOOTS
"No! I will win! I will triumph!" the yellow scientist yelled out, his large head, which strangely enough had a capital N on it, was taking up most of the space in the cockpit of his machine.
"Give it up Cortex! You won't leave, we won't let you take over an alternate earth!" yelled the blond-haired, orange-furred, coverall-wearing, female bandicoot who could only be known as Coco Bandicoot. Her big brother, the real hero, Crash Bandicoot stuck his tongue out and nodded his head really hard.
"I still have the power crystals and master crystal! Not to mention all five colored gems!" Cortex had to act now, or it would all be for naught. He smiled, "I'm afraid I must be going. Goodbye FOREVER!" Cortex opened the portal, and ejected himself. He had the portal rigged so most of his lab would appear in the alternate world, but not the part with the bandicoots. He was taking the crystals and colored gems with him so his conquest would be absolute.
"What are you doin' standin' there!?" Coco turned to see her adopted elder brother, Crunch, running up and keeping the quickly sealing door open, "Go! I'll protect the island while you're gone!" Crash just silently nodded and crawled under, Coco followed suit and soon most of the lab was gone, and Crunch wondered whether he should be worried for his creator, or his younger sis. He decided to worry about what Crash was going to do to Cortex, only because he knew he was missing out on beating the snot out of Cortex. "Dang! I would have followed him if I didn't need to protect the island. Give 'im one for me Crash!"
Meanwhile-Twilight's balcony
"Hmm? What is that?" Twilight levitated a pair of binoculars up to her eyes with her magic. She was astounded at what she saw. It looked like a really strange castle suddenly appeared out in the middle of the Everfree forest, it was also very well lit. This was important enough for the princess. "Owlicious. Take a letter."
End of prologue!
Author's note: I know, I've already got two stories in the works, but I have a plan for those two to work in conjunction at a certain point I haven't reached yet. So until I get another editor, enjoy this story of complete and total chaos!
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Interesting idea for the story. I cannot wait to read more of it. Please do keep up the good work.
Now thats what i call "A Hair Razing" Adventure... Good job on Crash Bandicoot if i do say so my self!
Lots of time in my youth wasted in that game.
Good start! You should probably make the next chapter longer though, still I liked reading this can't wait for more!
and just a comic appered in equestria daily!:
http://glancojusticar.deviantart.com/art/Unbearable-Guilt-271748171
oh by the moon, crash bandicoot, now THAT brings back memories.
Excellent idea! You may want to draw it out a little more, spend time building character and atmosphere and describing emotion. For a prologue it's not bad though.
Want to read...
Too tired...
Will track so I can read in the... Oh crap, its 2:00 in the morning...
(My first ever comment round-up! Whoo!)
54657 54899 Thanks guys. You are the best.
54931 I know! I would always get stuck on a quick jumping puzzle. Although it was funny when he died. WOAH!
54979 55106 The chapter was made short on purpose. Why? Because I'm evil! Nah! Just wanted to see if the story would stick to the back of your minds, which it did, my inspiration drives me to write!
55013 Well THAT figures...GODDAMMIT! SONNOFAnaggingbit...*indistinct mumbleing*.........alright, I'm good. Funny comic, but this happens every god damn time! How? HOW!?
Thanks for pointing that out though. 
55057 Nothin' like a bit of nostalgia to go with your ponies. Still tryin' to get the races done with at least a silver. Warped was hard enough without the races. Poor Tiny...okay I'm over it!
55120 So...tired...must write...must...zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!
AH! Wha!? 
I'm awake, I'm awake! 
*yawn* good mornin'
I shall be waiting for the next chapter, im going to go be bored in school now...
55180
take a break for ze sleepytimez, trust me, writing while sleepy usually ends up with some weird writing styles happening
55463 Oh the irony! I was getting the next chapter started on my iPod, and I fell asleep with it in edit mode. And then I turned into Sweetie Derelle, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
I looked over the chapter though and it's unharmed. Next time I feel like a chapter can't wait, I'll have Crunch force me into bed or something.
55531 To clarify, I woke up with a long string of a's at the end, the rest of the chapter was unharmed. I'm so stupid for trying to do the next chapter at 2:00 in the morning anyways.
Now back to the chapter!