This story is now an outdated version. An updated version will be linked here when it is available. This version is being left up for now, but will not receive any updates and is cancelled.
The only thing Midnight Shadow wanted was a normal life. He thought that by creating a mechanical leg to replace his missing one, he could have that. He was wrong.
By creating this new invention, he unknowingly sends himself down a new path. A path full of new friends, new enemies, endless secrets, and the beginning of a dark mystery just waiting to be uncovered.
Chapters (13)
It a magik steeeeel!
So is Flux-steel actually mithril? Also are some of the ones against Celestia infact members of the council which rejected Midnight's horn? Anyway beside these questions I am enjoying this story and I can't wait to see how Midnight Shadow handles the insanity that is Ponyville and it's residents along with what kind of influence he will have on events to come and how things progress concerning those who are against his position and Celestia!
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Flux-steel is somewhat like mithril in that it does have magical properties, but those magical properties are different. For example, flux-steel is completely immune to normal magic. And as for the council members, that's a definite maybe. Glad you're enjoying the story so far!
...What! The! *Censored*!? Is Shadow being held captive and being drugged by those who are against Celestia? If so is he about to be brainwashed/ conditioned to follow orders?
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Most of your questions will be answered in the next chapter. But, no, Shadow wasn't drugged.
This story sounds interesting, but I must say, Midnight Shadow sounds more like a bat pony name.
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Interesting... . .
this is progressing quite nicely
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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I honestly don't know exactly what their voices would sound like, so it's really up to whoever's reading it to decide.
Looking at how Twilight would see it, I don't also trust Midnight Shadow. After the time skip, he seems crazy to me, that he will snap and do something horrible...
stress of my work
(i believe you are getting the picture by now)
fix these mistakes and the good chapter will become a great chapter
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I know there are a lot of spacing mistakes, but they're mostly due to the spacebar on my laptop not working properly as well as the fact that I copy the story over from a Word document. I'll try to catch more of these mistakes in the rewrite.
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if you want i could preread it for you
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I really do appreciate the offer, but for the time being I'm going to have to say no. Thank you, though.
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I believe it's more like Anti-Magic Titanium. Twilight couldn't do anything with her magic, but it's extremely light when actually trying to lift it with one's hooves.
Que the sting;
OK, I know this is cancelled but I'd like say job well done. WhIle it does get awkward in the dialogue, this is a fic I can enjoy