A world forgotten.

The history of Equestria. Celestia unveils the true history of Equestria upon the arrival of a human in her world. This is a one shot with NO CLOP material in it. I have NOT planned to make this story any further as this was my first MLP story. I evolved this story into my current one "What's Love got to do with it?"

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MikeDave

MikeDave #1 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

Is this that human that Celestia was talking about in 'What's love got to do with it'?

Foalicon_

Foalicon_ #2 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

13,000 words 1 chapter O.O I feel discouraged

MikeDave

MikeDave #3 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

974567 You know you want to read it, you have to. It's by Furstreak so it has to be brilliant.

Foalicon_

Foalicon_ #4 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

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I do want to read it it's just that....I'll lose focus,leave,come back then forget what I just read

TheTownCrier

TheTownCrier #5 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

I read this on FanFiction. Sad about Celestia. She needs more love in my opinion.

Patrick Galloway

Patrick Galloway #6 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

Not bad at all.
Another Twilight becomes an Alicorn. :
In any scenario, I'd recommend working on spelling and Grammar, but, it was readable.
So, what was the point of Gabriel? Did he have ANY use at all in this?

Furstreak

Furstreak #7 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

974929originally I had planned on making this story "What's love got to do with it? but I rushed through ti because of little time and got bored with how things were going. So I redeveloped the entire story into a new one that is now almost 100 chapters long PLUS over 200k words. Just thought I would share with you guys how I started 'Whats love got to do with it?'

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Nope sorry, I may write that story sometime inthe future though :)

ShadowOfOrder