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Dissociative Identity disorder. Also known as multiple personality disorder. Rosemary was diagnosed with this condition when she was just a filly. She had discovered that hidden inside her was a whole other pony-a thieving, sly mare. And when that mare came out, all hell broke loose. Now Rosemary moves to Ponyville to start a new life-but as she learns the hard way, you can never fully escape your past.
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Seductive........................................I am definetly going to read this. But if she's arousing then I will demand that this fic has sex in it.
I'm in love with this fic, tracked and faved. And liked as well, this needs to be in the featured box NOW!!!!.
970460 Thanks
and I can only wish
Neat. Getting a thumbs up from me
Also, THANK YOU for not making your OC a Mary Sue!
-Edit-I've seen WAY too many Mary Sues to count on five hundred fingers...
Also known as Schizophrenia
moar, this fic is so awesooooome
I'm going to read this later, because Shiro linked it.
Uhmmm. Sooooo.........Uhmmmmmmmm.....Uhhhhh...Good, yea. This is going to be good. I noticed a few things though, during the first chapter you were using hyphens in places where commas should be. No grammar errors, try to cut down on the paragraphs.
oooo...I'm Liking this Story
this one is going to the faves
Looks interesting. It seems Thorn (though ,I'd prefer to call her Mary, as she is the other side of Rosemary) does not like Rose being hurt. Curious. Also, they do not share memories.
992544 Well, first of all, when Rosemary is hurt (physically), Thorn is also hurt. Thorn didn't beat up the colts because of Rosemary, but rather because she was the one that was covered in cake. Also, no, they don't share memories. But if you woke up on the floor, with a bunch of colts pointing and laughing at you, you can put two and two together.
I wonder what the relationship between the two are and how it will go around Ponyville.
Also, what world did Rosemary think that her condition won't be known to Ponyville residents? She knows that she needs to slop only once after all. Isn't there psychiatric care?
This is quite unique and different fic, keep up your writing.
whens the next chapter? cant wait for it
Tracked+Faved. love this idea. please make more!
992582 IS IT DEAD?! ANSWER ME!