Sometimes friends are awkward.
Other times they just don't know when to quit, while they are ahead.
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Trixie and Starlight have a great dynamic.
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Trixie is dynamic with anypony!
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Correct.
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I love Trixie. She's one of the few ponies who can reliably get under Twilight's skin and it's hilarious.
Good God, Trixie can be so obnoxious.
Trixie: " The Humble and Penitent Trixie wishes to apologize for misspelling your name, Sweetie Drops".
(and she had to blow my cover too)
Bon Bon:
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Honestly. I had a whole scene where she called Sweetie Drops, Cough Drops- told glimmer it is because she looked like a lozenge.
But thought Bon-bon was the wider accepted fan name, so went the Bun , Cinnabon route.
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Hmmm. Quite.
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Trixie is made of dynamite?
It once took me 3 partial months to learn a persons name. Now I come up with some crazy story. Like a person I know named Tasha who is named after the great empress of Vietnam who is the only female to beat George Washington in a sock rolling competition using 25 pieces of cardboard.
I find this works great for first names not last names. I believe her last name starts with an S but I am not sure. I usually am within 5 letters ether way in the English alphabet.
Another good story. Short and sweet and didn’t overplay a joke too much like some other stories I have read. There’s some serious
jealousy inducingtalent in this writer.This reminds me of a joke DWK made in one of his videos about Trixie. He once referred to her as "The Great and Salty Triscuit".
Anyway, this was cute.
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That sounds so priceless.
I'm happy you enjoy the story,
That was a fun story, but it could use some editing. Verb tense and phrasing was off some, but recheck your condiments for sure.
Good job on the concept though. You took it in a direction I wasn't expecting with Trixie's apology. I expected her to get more names wrong instead.
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Heehee. Thank you so much!
Also super thank you for pointing out my flaws, by saying i need editing. Can't get better unless people tell me i've made mistakes.
If you don't mind me asking, do you know of a good group or something on this site that could offer editing services?
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I do a little here and there, but I'm already overbooked. You can try these groups, or maybe try asking a few authors you admire who they'd recommend. Wanderer D and Admiral Biscuit might be helpful and friendly, though most people who stick around these parts are. People love helping someone willing to take some advice.
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Heehee. Thank you so much for the list.
This needs some work in sentence structure. But overal, it was a nice reading. Loved the ending.