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The Maretian - Kris Overstreet



Mark Watney is stranded- the only human on Mars. But he's not alone- five astronauts from a magical kingdom are shipwrecked with him.

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Sol 147

AMICITAS FLIGHT THREE – MISSION DAY 147
ARES III SOL 147

To: Cherry Berry (a1_48@ares.nasa.gov)
From: Melissa Lewis (mlewis@ares.nasa.gov)
Subject: One Commander to Another

I asked Dr. Shields to give me your email address so I could talk to you directly. First, how is Mark doing? He was always a handful to manage when he was on my crew. He always has these ideas he wants to pursue, and even if some of them are good, you have to ease him back on task without discouraging him. And then, of course, there are all the smartass remarks. He doesn’t mean to be disrespectful, but he definitely wouldn’t last long under any military discipline, let’s put it that way. I hope he’s not being too much of a pain.

To be honest, I’m writing you because I miss my sixth crew member. Mark Watney should have evacuated with the rest of us back on Sol 6. It was a very good thing for you and your crew that he didn’t, but I still feel guilty about leaving him behind. It was my duty to see him safely off the planet, and no matter why, I didn’t. I did everything I could, and I can’t think of anything I would have done differently, but the fact is that Mark is down there with you and not up here with me.

It’s a very heavy responsibility being commander of a spaceship, as you know yourself. You have to keep your crew active, motivated, and working together, even though they’re all highly skilled, strong-willed people with their own ideas, plans and hopes. You have to make sure their needs are met before your own. You have to correct them, discipline them, encourage them, and back them to the limit.

But the thing is, leaders aren’t alone. Just as I look out for my crew, so my crew have looked out for me since we left Mars. A good crew will support each other. Yes, they look to their commander for strength and purpose, but they will have your back when you need them.

How are your flight sims coming? I bet our flight systems are a lot different from yours. I wish I could have seen the inside of your ship for myself. From the pictures Mark sent, it must have been a fine ship before the crash. I’m sure you’re still proud of it. You should definitely be proud of your landing. I don’t know any human pilot who could have pulled off that crash-landing with everyone alive.

Write back to me when you have the chance. I want to hear how our systems look like from your point of view.

Cmdr. Melissa Lewis, USN
Mission commander, Ares III

To: Melissa Lewis (mlewis@ares.nasa.gov)
From: Cherry Berry (a1_48@ares.nasa.gov)
Subject: Re: One Commander to Another

I am sorry if my English is bad. I type slowly. Starlight helps.

Mark is fine. He tries to take care of us. He says a lot of things we don’t understand. I guess those are jokes, I don’t know.

It’s not the same thing, you and me. You wanted command. I only want to fly. Back home we have princesses to command. Here is only me.

Mark helps much. We follow his orders when in the Hab mostly. Rest of my crew helps too. Sometimes I wish they would help less a little.

Flying your ship is tough. The navigation system is all different. You have so many systems, not work together by themselves. I think your machines work better, but are not built as well as ours. What we build works, every time, or else we don’t fly it.

The main thing I see is that we use all the power, all the rockets, that we might need for the mission. You seem to use the least power, rockets, etc. you can and then hope nothing goes wrong.

Thanks for writing. I will write again.

Cherry Berry
Chief pilot, Bug-pony Space Program

To: Cherry Berry (a1_48@ares.nasa.gov)
From: Melissa Lewis (mlewis@ares.nasa.gov)
Subject: Re: One Commander to Another

One question: “Bug-pony Space Program”? Do you not fly for your country’s space agency?

Lewis

To: Melissa Lewis (mlewis@ares.nasa.gov)
From: Cherry Berry (a1_48@ares.nasa.gov)
Subject: Re: One Commander to Another

When we first started flying in space, Pony-Land Space Agency wanted only pegasi for pilots. Bug-ponies were only people need enough to try an earth pony pilot. We made it work. Now all space agencies work together. But I am still proud of what we did at Bug-pony Space Program.

Cherry

Author's Note:

Some of you might guess this isn't exactly unprompted, and you'd be right.

More might come of this in the future, or not.

Grabbing six hours of sleep in Denver. Tomorrow, mountains.

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