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GhoulDash97


"Show me a hero and I'll write you a tragedy." - F. Scott Fitzgerald

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Not one sign of regret or remorse. They even went to get lunch before meeting with Celestia. And they actually thought they were getting a friendship test.

Wow man....

And Twilight didn't even understand 'who' they were implying 'What did you do to him?

Congratulations Twilight. You just lost your chance for forgiveness.

You reap what you sow ponies and now you're all gonna have a bad horrifying time for what you did to Spike. :pinkiecrazy:

It's Sunburst, not Starburst.

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I sometimes forget the name. The candy keeps coming to mind.

I think I want to kill twilight now.

So......
Starswirl and the pillars are dead?

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If you have read my message in the last chapter, I intend on writing what has happened while Spike was corrupted. But that will be after the story is finished, depending on how many chapters I write. But if you want me to write the chapters prior to the current ones, then I need a reason why.

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8656067 Not to mention the aw struck story we are writing that is set within the same continuity(Unsure if it will be a spin-off of something). There, we'll have things more in detail.

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Right now, I'm focusing on this until we get everything in order.

8656100 Oh I know*Wink,wink*

The first half of this chapter was confusing. It's written as though Starlight is only talking to one pony, but it keeps changing on whether that pony is Cadence or Luna. :applejackconfused:

I like the story, I like it is going so far but I feel like the pacing on some of the chapters is a bit confusing. What I mean by that is that in some chapters the pacing goes really fast , in others is just about right.

:pinkiegasp:Damn....the mane 6 are going to get fucked up:pinkiecrazy:

holy Shit!...that was awesome:rainbowdetermined2:
what should Spike even be called now?....the Dark Dragon or the Drake of Shadows?....either one would b awesome and I'd join him in a heart beat, those Ponies need to be shown their rightful place, squashed under the foot of the truly powerful like the insects they are:pinkiecrazy:

Damn:applejackunsure:......this is getting good:pinkiecrazy:

I really hope you can finish 'Marriage' when this is over. Something tells me were gonna need a 'Pick- me- up' after this

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I'm halfway in the story right now. I intend on going ahead with the story when I have the time.

And when the shadow pony is somehow defeated after much death and blood is spill and when hundreds and thousands or dead and the dusk of the aftermath settles at the end of the story at last what then they can't undo the deaths or the anger hate that will spike was tricked into starting spike may be just hated even more even if he is not at fault for the corruption, evil dose not have to survive to win it already wins when it cause everyone to hate each other after its defeat for bitterness and resent to those who caused this sad tale to begin dose not end something more a miracle must happen to end the sad tale where there is humbleness for those who survive and those who have resentment towards those who started this sad tale and accept that they must move on from the past and do what they can to prevent the mistakes they made from happening again.

"Oh! This ought to be interesting." Discord said with glee as he went into the throne room.

Seriously Discord, you're just going to sit back and allow a threat that could possibly obliterate you if you got careless spread!? What would Fluttershy say if she found out about this!?!

Oh great. Now Discord will ve an idiot and get corrupted by the Shadow knockoff.

Good job Twilight. You fucked Equestria

Good job Discord, you have fucked up Equestra with your plan. I can't beave the main 6 fallowed with his plan, and didn't say no on the spot.

This really doesnt help or justify anything. Realizing it was all a setup will make Spike hate them even more now. This is going against the description of Twilight having to stop him. It seems to be leaning toward Starlight being the hero since Twilight and the mane 6 are becoming more like villans now. With how things are, everyone is pretty much fucked. Because there is no way the elements of harmony are gonna fix this now that thier wielders have gone against everything they stood for.

DISCORD YOU JACKASS!!!!:flutterrage:
now I'm hoping Spike rips you to pieces along with the Mane 6:twilightangry2:

8790135 Your not wrong... although things will be explained later on(Arc 2). I won't reveal much out of the creator's request but it gets much more... different.

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your comment is enough for me to consider this story and put it on the read it later bin, hope it turns out alright

when chaos and Darkness clash, the world trembles in fear:pinkiecrazy:


good chapter, and I'm so hoping Spike turns Discord into a mismatched fur coat:twilightangry2:

I'm so glad I caught up in time so I can say this...

Wow, unless then an hour ago, I caught up & now I'm already reading the next chapter? Talk about timing.

Awesome! Take him down Spike!:moustache:

You know normally Discord is my second favorite character:unsuresweetie: But I can honestly say, I really hate this Discord:twilightangry2:
and hope Spike sends him to suffer in hell for all of eternity:pinkiecrazy:

good chapter:moustache:

So Discord dies and Equestria falls. What's next then? He'll have everything he ever wanted. But one thing that will linger will be the guilt. Even though he was upset on how they treated them they were still his family. They knew they failed big time but killing them will solve nonthing. Spike will just be haunted by guilt and greif and his shadow buddy will just constantly remind him about it. He's just gonna go insane with guilt (if he isn't insane already)

Oh... Shit... If Spike managed to do the unthinkable by killing Discord.... What's he gonna do when he gets his hands on the girls...

god dame good story.

Excellent!:moustache: I have to go and say it. The main 6 screwed up big-time and I think Spike will win this battle and take over Equestria as he said.

That just my opinion and believe, so please don't judge me.
Truth be told I'm on team :moustache:

Again please don't judge me!

An invasion is coming...

It's time for war...

MORE!!!:flutterrage: please and thank you:yay:

I have project Balefire on standby. Say the word and I'll nuke those pricks!

I love this story but at the same time, I feel like I hate it now because spike is being a prick...for good reasons mind you to an extent, world domination is a bit much for being banished from twilights castle

I don't pity Discord in the slightest:ajbemused:
you don't piss off a dragon and then turn around and expect any sort of mercy :pinkiecrazy:

This is a really good chapter until the end.

By "the Pony of Shadows" do you mean the guy from Castle-Mania or the thing from Shadow Play?

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