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Boltsinger


Writer, vocalist. Originally had a little story to tell. Over a hundred chapters later, still going strong.

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His name is Boltsinger. He always saw himself as a relatively normal pony. Save for one strange fact. Ever since he got his Cutie Mark, his wings have been taking him places without his say-so. Everywhere he goes, somepony needs his help, and he's just the stallion for the job. Something was off about his next destination though. Crashing into a wall at the castle in Canterlot apparently gets the attention of important ponies, and that leads to some... interesting questions.

Special thanks to Hoodwinked McShelster for the amazing cover art! Click the name to find her page!

Chapters (57)
Comments ( 135 )

If Boltsinger was voiced, what would he sound like?

Comment posted by Boltsinger deleted Dec 30th, 2017

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Well, he's actually based on some of my own personality traits. He would sound very much like me, if not exactly. Including his singing voice. That means he's got a baritone voice that tends to go into the deep end, but can also hit some tenor tones. However, he's better at enunciation than I am. It's a fairly wide range, if I do say so myself, as I've had to perform both tenor and bass in choirs. I'd go into detail, but that would just turn into an advertisement for voice over, and I don't think that's a thing I should be blatantly doing on this site.

Why has nobody liked this yet? This seems like a cool story.

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Working on it as we speak. Feels a little ad libbed right now, but I do have plenty more in store.

Soooooo... attempted assault on a guest of royalty and he can walk away like that ?... '-'

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You know, you raise a good point. I hadn't thought of that when I wrote it. Might make an edit to the chapter to address that little bit.

And so we see this story come the closest it ever will to an HiE story. :rainbowwild:

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Haven't been on the site for very long. Care to elaborate?

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I imagine they are referring to how HiE stories often have the MC getting multiple mares interested in them. Not that it's exclusive to HiE stories.

I'm definitely enjoying this story as well as this development with Fluttershy. Looking forward to more.

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Ah. Well, thank you. Working on the next part as we speak.

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Looking at the post dates for chapters, did you have alot of the story prewritten or do you just never sleep? XD.

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I had the first 25 chapters of the story done before I finally decided to post it. It's been at the forefront of my mind for a while now. It just took some time for me to build up the confidence to put it out there.

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ah, well no worries it's a very nice chill story. Too few of those on this website in my opinion.

Spacecowboy
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Fourth wal breaking to that degree is, in my opinion, tacky and should be avoided. The bit with Pinkie jumping town to hound the brother... believable for her character, and it does give some more content to the plot, but yeah. Fourth wall breaking was kinda meh to see.

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It was the best I could come up with. Pinkie is... interesting to write for, but I doubt I was able to get her antics down completely. I'll take your advice into account next time I follow her around for a chapter.

It wasn't attempted assault it was blatant assault. Realistically celestia should have had the assailant arrested.

Oh I guess we're done with the Fluttershy story. That's a little jarring, had to check to see if I skipped a chapter XD.

Well good chapter anyways despite the brief confusion.

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I wanted to get to the meat of the scenario sooner rather than later, as my ideas on how to pad it out were a bit... lacking. I knew how Bolt was going to face it, but from there, I had no idea. That isn't to say that the feelings aren't still there. She may have a resurgence eventually, but right now there's other things to focus on.

Calling it now, Chrysalis' daughter or something like that. :pinkiecrazy:

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Would you believe me if I told you that even I'm not sure as of yet?

Really hope to see more soon and wish that his brother will be free of the influence and powerful magical sway that mare has against him and uses for her own nefarious needs.

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Do you have any voice actors in mind who might come close?

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A friend of mine says that Sean Schemmel and I sound very much alike in some regards. Definitely not on the Goku front, though. I'm not as high of a pitch as he is. Once I've got some of my own voice over online, I'll let you know. But if you want to hear at least a version of the first song that was sung by Boltsinger in the story, I can link you to that. It was recorded by my brother and I.

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So, I figured out that which I wasn't sure about. Your guess was... interesting, but it felt a little cliche.
However, I did base the actual events off of said guess. So, thank you for making an awesome contribution to the story! I hope you appreciate what I came up with!

I have been waiting for this to happen ever since it was mentioned in one of the previous chapters

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I see you got my reference. Yeah, the Pony-glyphs will make a return. I just need to figure out how I want to write that story.

Kinda reminds me of my oc Star flight cept she's a Dj. She also has magic in her wings that can take her to certain locations and she has control over it.

Things are getting interesing

Gotta say this was well done. Definitely felt like something you might see in the show.

Twilight’s wings shit straight up

Um, yeah, as interesting as that may be to see, I believe you meant 'shot' :facehoof:

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I did. Thank you for pointing that out. Gonna go edit that now.

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Hope there's a sequel of some sort

Nice ending was a real enjoyable story. I look forward to the sequel.

Nice ending i chose to favorite this story after a reading a few chapters and when i read a few more i chose to track it so im ready to read the sequel when it comes out

I have really enjoyed this, the ending was great and I loved every moment.

Comment posted by Boltsinger deleted Feb 17th, 2018

I liked this :P the whole fourth wall thing......very Pinkie :pinkiecrazy:

hmm...I'm thinking a iron giant voice

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Wait what?! Click the link in the author's notes of the chapter "Pony of Performance". That's quite literally Bolt's voice. I know, 'cause it's my voice, and I would likely be the one playing him should he ever need it.

I know you're joking. It just caught me off guard. :twilightsheepish:

“Yeah!” Rainbow Dash answered. “He may not have much aerial skill yet, but that stallion has stamina for actual days!”

For the ladys say; Bow chicka bow wow

Based on some of the feedback ive seen, Ive decided to read your fic. In all honesty, ill probably download it to my kindle and read it while I have down time. Ill comment and let you know my thoughts when im done. I look forward to what sounds like a hilarious story. :)

“If you want to go to all that trouble, I won’t stop you, but I don’t think there’s anypony that really knows anymore that would just tell you.” He started, taking a look back at her. “So, unless you plan to go all the way to Vanhoover and ask my brother, I don’t know how you’re gonna…” Pinkie sat up, showing a look of excited realization. “Pinkie? Are you okay?”

Why not just ask grand pear and see if he knows?

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