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Evilhumour


Well, this a fan of MLP who has just started to watch the show. And I like what I see!

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There are many Reapers, those who monitor the souls of the living and guide them into the realms of the Dead. Now, one is being forced to take a break from his duties. Sent into the land of Equestria until further notice, he meets with one of his charges.

This is the story of Fall Harvest, the Death of Alicorns… and the past he will reveal to Princess Twilight Sparkle.


Part of my Multiverse and a work with Anon E. Mouse Jr.

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Comments ( 42 )

Well, this seems interesting! I'll be keeping an eye on it.

Looks nice!

I bet someone is going to read this and use winged unicorn to make an alicorn OC that people won't yell at them for

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Thanks!

I'm surprised that there not more people using winged unicorns or horn pegasus as an alicorn OC, to be honest.

No one could ever win against Death itself

Well, Windy Days would argue. On that note, who's the Reaper of Unicorns?

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If I'm not mistaken, Fall Harvest's former protegé Hollow Grave handles ponies of all types except for Alicorns in this dimension.

Until next time...
Anon e Mouse Jr.

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It is Hollow Grave that is the Reaper of Ponies.

Well. Not much to say, other than I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

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It is all but done, just waiting for Anon to give me the go ahead to post it.

Now this is going to be interesting.

Interesting...
For no reason at all, I'm curious as to what Helheim or Fall or Casuality (or all three) would think of Clockstoppers and Savers. (Beings with the ability to stop time and beings with the ability to save and load, like in a game, respectively.)

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Not sure to be honest.

Fall Harvest debated whether or not he should go stop Apple Bloom from getting her sister involved. On one hoof, it might solve a lot of future headaches and issues and problems that would no doubt arise from being in Ponyville.

But on the other hoof, he was on vacation, being visible was not a massive issue. He shouldn’t have to work that hard if he was sent to enjoy himself on his down time, right?

Then again, it wasn’t the smartest ide-

Ahh indecision, you are the true nemesis of us lazy people :moustache:

Even though she was overjoyed by his simple actions, he had a feeling that this was going to bite him in the flanks before the day was through.

Of course it will :pinkiecrazy:

And depending on how enraged she was, he just might have Hollow Grave appear by him and start smacking him upside the head for increasing her workload.

So Hollow Grave handles ponies :trixieshiftright:

And i don't know why, but every time i hear how mad Celestia would be if she heard he was back, i can't help but think that he skipped out on a date or something :trixieshiftleft:

“Do kissing and snuggling count?”

Seriously, i always imagine Celestia when Fall talks about things like this

“I, frankly, believe that one should wait until they’re married before they do…that,” he trailed off, feeling himself blush. “That was the plan with my old marefriend before we broke up.”

So you broke up with Celestia ?.... Argh i need to know :raritydespair: ..... Loving this so far and looking forward to reading more and finding out what happend between Fall and Celestia :raritystarry:

“I said shut your Creators-blasted mouth, Fall!” she screamed at him while Fall was working with a nearly completely caved in skull after she slapped him.

“Okay, I was wrong; that hurts, Celestia,” he said as he reformed the bones in his skull and fixed the flesh on his face. “And as I was saying, I was sent here on vacation by Helheim; I was trying to get out of-”

“I said I don’t care about your damn lies, Fall, so you better get out of my kingdom before I-”

Okay, so he might have done something just a tad worse than standing her up on their date night :ajsleepy:

Chapter six: Story time Part 1 :moustache:

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So true on both accounts!

I really like the concept. I'm curios about his past with Celestia. Definitely going to keep reading.

What happened between Fall Harvest and Celestia? I'm sooooo curious!!
I would not be surprised if Pinkie was correct in her guess. He's a Reaper now, but he had to be the Alicorn of something when he was alive.
I'm really curious about how one becomes a Reaper. I hope we get a bit more information about that.

Marefriend ey? Would this mare happen to be the same mare that you so desperately want to avoid meeting perhaps?
Hehe, you think Discord can't mess with you just because he shouldn't harm you directly. All he has to do is tell Celestia that you're there.
I really like that winged unicorns and horned pegasi are really within the story.

Rainbow, if you don't trust him, you should let him leave. He clearly doesn't want to be there, why do you want him there?
Rarity has a crush on him. :rainbowlaugh:

Wait I'm confused. Why was he running to twilights castle? I know that she had seen his true for an teleported away, but why go after her? Why not just leave ponyville? Also, dang! He was not exaggerating about how mad Celestia would be. Spike is the best! When did he get a sword from the Crystal Empire? And how did Twilight not know about it?

I love that Helheim is there too. You know just Death them self casually sitting down with some mortal ponies to listen to a story. A story she already knows mind you.
Everyone keeps interrupting Fall Harvest. It's hilarious.
Light Peanut does not a name I would expect for a Reaper.
Yay! We learned how one becomes a Reaper. I'm curios about how Light Peanut chose Fall Harvest. Hehe the ancient pony tribes didn't want anything to do with the alicorns. Or maybe the alicorns didn't want anything to do with the other three tribes?

No matter how many stories I read, cliffhangers still annoy me. Nice job on the chapter though, story time is getting interesting.

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That's not exactly a cliffhanger. It's just a lead into the next chapter.

Mind you, cliffhangers do that too, but the reason they're called cliffhangers is that they end on a tense or possibly even dangerous situation. Here, Fall Harvest is still just telling Twilight a story, and simply stated what the next part was going to be about. No indication of any particular tension just yet, so it's not a cliffhanger. :twilightsmile:

Unless, of course, it totally is! :pinkiecrazy:

PINKIE! Stop that! :twilightangry2:

Hang those cliffs, Evilpup! Hang them! :pinkiegasp:

Argh... :facehoof:

“All right, all right…” Fall looked contemplative. “So… next comes the part you really care about; where I meet Celestia for the first time.”

“ HA! ” Helheim laughed loudly before she coughed and waved Fall on.

I am Lady Helheim in this scene :twilightsmile:

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We'll be working on it soon enough.

This is interesting. Thumbs up and followed. I see it hasn't been updated in a while which is sad, because I am interested in what is going to happen.

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Thank you for the kind words; though we are working on the other stories.

“I was answering her comment,” Fall shot back. “But my history with Celestia begins a while after that, the day I died in fact.”

Like all good stories do :trollestia:

Turning his head to the side, he saw Twilight Sparkle staring straight at him before teleporting away and his senses told him that the other five Ladies that lived in Ponyville were in the vicinity. Knowing that things could get very unpleasant in the next few minutes, Fall Harvest shook his head and said,

“Shit.”

DAMN IT MURPHY!!!!!!

“You did what‽” Fall shouted as he extended his senses outwards and felt around the sun. Sure enough, there was sudden stillness in the firey body of deadly plasma before it exploded with metaphorical rage; moments later the true source of it left Canterlot and began to make its way to Ponyville. With only seconds to prepare himself for what was about to happen, Fall Harvest just muttered one word to himself as he pushed the Powers behind him and away from the door...

“Shit.”

DAMN IT MURPHY!!!!!!!! you just had to go and stick you nose in where it does not belong

Will this be continued soon?

He could also remember periodic instances of souls who had died and just not realized it at the time, including a story told by one adjunct of a Death from another dimension who had recounted being sent to retrieve a young adult female, one so in denial about her own death that she had kept traveling along the road she was on, despite seeing the adjunct by its side repeatedly, until finally she had been forced to confront the truth and had come back to let him take her on to the next plane of existence. The adjunct had always ended the story with the same line he had given the female: "I believe you're going… my way?"

Twilight zone reference

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Hopefully when? Its now 2023.

Came from https://tvtropes.org/Main/MetaphoricallyTrue

Mysterious history!
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Typos:

centre of operation > centre of operations

whenever you get chance > whenever you get a chance

Woo! Storytime!

Typo:

recluntently > reluctantly

differents souls > different souls

I thought Fall was obliquely talking about Celestia back when he was dealing with Rarity! Ha!

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I wonder if part of the Alicorn / Pony split was due to Tirek eating magic...

Typo:

gardner > gardener x2+?

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