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"Friendship is an island that you retreat to. And you fall on the floor and laugh at all the ninnies who don't have enough brains to have your good taste." --Ray Bradbury

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Suit and sad tag? Yeah, well. Kinda gave out the punchline.
Then again, you probably didn`t write this to be funny, so it wasn`t too important to keep the punchline obscured.

If by punchline, you mean surprise ending, then yeah, you're right. I wanted to make sure that the ending wasn't all that the story had to offer. A good parent's teachings can last beyond a parent's life and therefore maintain a connection with loved ones. I figure that observation wasn't too dusty to use, so I used it.

The twist's that he's dead, calling it now-

Yep.

Well, I guess the fic itself is written well.

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I'm glad that you liked it. :raritywink:

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I like you. Following and liking.

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Ooh, thanks! I love getting watches and likes. :raritystarry:

Predictable.

Sad but profound. Nicely done. Though I wonder where was Sweetie Belle in all this.

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Thanks! Rarity's sister wasn't useful for this story, so she was with her friends for the duration.

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Seems kinda odd. That's her father's funeral? But I digress

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