• Member Since 16th May, 2015
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Lise Eclaire


If you happen to cry, I will be there. If you happen to smile, will you do the same for me?

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Rainbow Dash and Twilight have a discussion about their favorite fictional character. However, the fictional character decides to join in.

Written for Rage Reviews’ FTP contest.

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So Rainbow's poor penmareship accidentally created a powerful rune that let's you converse with fictional characters, or in this particular case fictionalized versions of ponies.

...maybe a beta reader? Phrases like:

So that’s why you eat beagles

...may not be setting quite the scene you intended.

I would like to see a continuation of this, with both daring and cabelleron talking to twi and rainbow at the same time...hijinks are sure to ensue...

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I don’t understand. What did Rainbow do?
And Daring eats dogs?

Raw is right. This is still disjointed at times, the ideas not always flowing cleanly. I definitely couldn't follow Twilight's last line of thought without reading the comments. And while people have mentioned the beagle/bagel issue, it bears repeating.

Still, the idea is neat. I hope you clean it up.

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Going by the ending, it appears to work at one level of fictionality, both up and down.

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Soylent green is puppies!

Thanks for the patience, all :) And yes, Raw means Raw :( I’ll clean it up (and add The missing segments). Stay tuned :D

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Sequel please.

This reminds me a bit of 'Inkheart'.
I like the idea, and it was fun to read. :)

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