The Twilight Perspective (RAW)

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Rainbow Dash and Twilight have a discussion about their favorite fictional character. However, the fictional character decides to join in.

Written for Rage Reviews’ FTP contest.

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Xanderfox

Xanderfox #1 · Dec 23rd, 2017 · 4 · ·

So Rainbow's poor penmareship accidentally created a powerful rune that let's you converse with fictional characters, or in this particular case fictionalized versions of ponies.

Geminii

Geminii #2 · Dec 23rd, 2017 · 2 · ·

...maybe a beta reader? Phrases like:

So that’s why you eat beagles

...may not be setting quite the scene you intended.

B4ssxCello

B4ssxCello #3 · Dec 23rd, 2017 · 1 · ·

I would like to see a continuation of this, with both daring and cabelleron talking to twi and rainbow at the same time...hijinks are sure to ensue...

Ri2

Ri2 #4 · Dec 23rd, 2017 · · ·

I don’t understand. What did Rainbow do?
And Daring eats dogs?

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #5 · Dec 24th, 2017 · · ·

Raw is right. This is still disjointed at times, the ideas not always flowing cleanly. I definitely couldn't follow Twilight's last line of thought without reading the comments. And while people have mentioned the beagle/bagel issue, it bears repeating.

Still, the idea is neat. I hope you clean it up.

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Going by the ending, it appears to work at one level of fictionality, both up and down.

Lise