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Oh man, 75k and counting. Quite a chunk for a new story. Gonna have to try and shuffle some time for the RIL.
My impression from the first chapter, though, is pretty good! You've got an intriguing setting, and I like the way that the pony elements are left as almost dangling teasers (the idea of a "Fluttershy" as some sort of mythic prowling Depths-beast is great). Solid sense of place (the condensation-rain and Skylight Park stick out in my mind as vividly realized) and good establishment of a hook. I do notice some typos here and there, but not enough to distract from the core tale. I'll try to get through more of this as I can!
It is a good day when a story of yours comes out.
First impressions are good. I really enjoyed Equestria 485,000, and I'm very excited for what's to come in the following chapters.
Now this is how you start a story!