In the wake of the return of the fallen alicorns Chroma and Echidna, Baroness Adagio Dazzle and Dame Suri Polomare have been dispatched to the Lunar Kingdom, to reassure its nobility that the newly rediscovered Elements of Harmony shall not be turned against them. But what should have been a simple and uneventful trip goes dramatically wrong when Baroness Dazzle claims to be able to defeat the dreaded Ursa Major. When challenged to live up to her boasts, Adagio must either find a way to conquer the mightiest of the denizens of the Everfree, or else be publically humiliated and driven from the Lunar Kingdom in shame...
A story of The Rainsverse. Rating for some explicit descriptions of violence.
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Great work on this chapter.
Hello there. Thanks very much for getting this story started. I have to admit, I kind of like the touch of starting the story in the middle of the actual adventure (along with, probably, some upcoming reflections on how the characters got into this mess in the first place). And, yeah, the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-ups are well done in all the right places. And, yeah, I will most assuredly be looking forward to more of this, but will also be more than willing to respect if real world concerns mean I have to be patient.