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Comrade Bagel Muffin
I'm the reason when you search Quibble you'll find Scootaloo too. PM me if you want to talk about anything one on one. Well I finally set up a patreon...Hazaa???
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You're not one of those authors, are you? The kind that doesn't respond to comments?
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I respond to comments when I can, why?
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like? Also, how many chapters long will this story be?
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I can't describe voices sorry, I'm just not that good I hear the voices but can't describe them I just read in that voice. Honestly I have absolutely no idea.
Is... is this what I think it is?
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I depends what you think it is.
Looking into the chapter I can tell it's not. I thought at first that it was the story of the Guard we met in Austraeoh, or perhaps Gold Petals, though as we all know, Gold Petals is female, and she makes it all the way to Ponyville. Still, the premise was intriguing enough, without the added information that this was inspired by Austraeoh.
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It's not based on or off of the Austraeoh saga. It is only inspired by it. It wouldn't be that long of a trip for her maybe ten months if not less.
Ah, very well then. I shall allow it the chance to stand on its own legs.
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Merci
Don't worry about writer's block.
Folks think that writing is a mindless task like pushing boxes all day.
It's not. Even folks who push boxes all day take breaks.
If you need a break, take it and relax.
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Merci Beaucoup and After a month I think I'm finally back on track.
Hopefully
story's
I'll read it and let you know.
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Merci beaucoup.
I like how you use names like 'Mother' and 'Father' instead of 'his mother' and 'his mother', I think even in third person view, when being told by the perspective of someone, the words 'Mother' and 'Father' give off a nice ring to it. Plus it makes it less tiring to put 'his mother'. Other than that, your description of the landscape and Escutcheon's emotions are done beautifully.
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Merci beaucoup.
Hey, pretty good. Liked and followed. What do the chapter titles mean?
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Which one there are quite a few.
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All of them
Also is Quete a misspelling of Cute or a foreign word?
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It was done because if you spell it right you have to spell it correctly in the search bar.
Woah, is this a clop story?!
Also, unnecessary author's note is very unnecessary.
First of all, author's notes are meant to be used to explain things in the chapter that may cause confusion, or to explain a perspective; not to apologize when chapters are late or to tell the reader the chapter is done -when it isn't.
If I found three grammatical errors and you admit you haven't an editor or proof reader, then it isn't done.
On to the next!
'Escutcheon' is one of the most difficult names I've ever had to try to read in a story about ponies. Why is it such a complicated sounding name?
Ech-üt-ch-eon?
Maybe it's just us colonists, but that's hard to enunciate.
This chapter is chock full of problems and doesn't really move the story anywhere. You could cut over half of it and use it to start the next chapter.
So I'm a few chapters in and I don't know what's happening, who escatauean is, what he's doing, where he's doing it, and where he's going except that he's lost and going home to a home that isn't there.
Really?! I didn't know. I feel so enlightened now.
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This is done on purpose. All in good time I promise.
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I just use them to log my thoughts as you've noticed. Sorry.
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Merci hopefully there won't be many more. I don't know I think it gives him direction.
So...a Unicorn colt on the quest to find his family...interesting
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Trust me budday, you’re not the first Unicorn to have trouble doing more than one spell
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Just keep moving Escu...just keep moving
.
He misses his mommy
.
Good to see Escutcheon is getting a little break
.
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Sorry about that I picked the name because of the meaning. Wasn't really thinking about that until a bit later.
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Oui we all need them from time to time.
Question: What are Iron Sides? Also, how dues Escutcheon know Big Mac:
?
Oh now, he lost his ride
!
Just who, and what, are those guys
?
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A large yak like animal.
Shhh, all in good time.
Come on mane...really
?
That is something I don't want to see
!
That's because he's not the type of animal that eats meat Gilda
!
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Okay
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I don't think she cares all that much.
Interesting...
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Well, at least she believes in her child...
Kind of reminds me of the Storm from In the Heart of the Sea...
Oh crap
!
Oh Tilda, please be okay
!
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Heart of the Sea??? Is that the movie or a story?
Don't think about what your father would do. Think about what you would do instead.
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Your comments are a great help in catching several of my mistakes once I get the last chapter up or after next semester's editing class I'll have to come back and proof this story. Merci Beaucoup.
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Thanks