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Vivid Syntax

Convention Runner, Statistician, and lover of all things Soarburn


Two decades ago, Sombra succeeded in conquering the Crystal Empire. Now, his estranged son Brimstone must face him and right the wrongs of the past.

A commission for Brimstone, starring his OC (Twitter | Tumblr)

Cover art by Evehly (DeviantArt)

Chapters (16)
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Comments ( 23 )

If Brimstone was voiced, what would he sound like?

Interesting... can’t wait to see where this goes :pinkiehappy:

Also, what are you planning in terms of how often updates are gonna float our way?:derpytongue2:

Good question! I imagine him as a baritone with slightly proper/royal speech pattern. Think "Pony of Shadows" but less menacing and more full-voiced instead of half-whispering. That's just my interpretation, though. What do you think he sounds like?

Nightly. The story is done, so I'll post a few chapters a day until it's all up, probably around Saturday.

Thanks! Glad you like it so far.

Knew it... Hehe. :yay:

Also, I'm loving this story! :heart:

Yay! Thanks! More's coming tomorrow. :pinkiehappy:

Noice, but it seems as if you just cut the chapter in half; it is a bit unfinished. Still good chapter, if a short one.

"Of course. You're very wise, Your Majesty."

Ohhhhhh snap :duck:

Well that was a short chapter... good thing you release two at a time. :raritywink:

Fields of eternal winter... sounds menacing.

It would be entirely too cheeky, even for me, to release just a short chapter. :scootangel:

Longer chapters, dawg.

Thanks for the feedback. The format was mostly done to meet the commissioner's needs for this one, but I realize I could have handled it differently. On the plus side, micro-chapters helped me get through it all more quickly.

If you prefer stories with longer chapters, I recommend my story "Sensation," available in SFW and NSFW flavors.

Forgot to mark this story complete.

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