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Vivid Syntax


Convention Runner, Statistician, and lover of all things Soarburn

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Two decades ago, Sombra succeeded in conquering the Crystal Empire. Now, his estranged son Brimstone must face him and right the wrongs of the past.

A commission for Brimstone, starring his OC (Twitter | Tumblr)

Cover art by Evehly (DeviantArt)

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 22 )

If Brimstone was voiced, what would he sound like?

Interesting... can’t wait to see where this goes :pinkiehappy:

Also, what are you planning in terms of how often updates are gonna float our way?:derpytongue2:

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Good question! I imagine him as a baritone with slightly proper/royal speech pattern. Think "Pony of Shadows" but less menacing and more full-voiced instead of half-whispering. That's just my interpretation, though. What do you think he sounds like?

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Nightly. The story is done, so I'll post a few chapters a day until it's all up, probably around Saturday.

Thanks! Glad you like it so far.

Knew it... Hehe. :yay:

Also, I'm loving this story! :heart:

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Yay! Thanks! More's coming tomorrow. :pinkiehappy:

Noice, but it seems as if you just cut the chapter in half; it is a bit unfinished. Still good chapter, if a short one.

"Of course. You're very wise, Your Majesty."

Ohhhhhh snap :duck:

Well that was a short chapter... good thing you release two at a time. :raritywink:

Fields of eternal winter... sounds menacing.

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It would be entirely too cheeky, even for me, to release just a short chapter. :scootangel:

Longer chapters, dawg.

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Thanks for the feedback. The format was mostly done to meet the commissioner's needs for this one, but I realize I could have handled it differently. On the plus side, micro-chapters helped me get through it all more quickly.

If you prefer stories with longer chapters, I recommend my story "Sensation," available in SFW and NSFW flavors.

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