Rainbows have nothing to hide

ENo Need to Say Goodbye
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
A train makes its way out of the Manehattan station, taking with it Twilight's unspoken thoughts towards one particular pony.
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Spike
Silent Whisper · 1k words · 76 4 · 1.6k views
EChase the Wind and Touch the Sky
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Rainbow watches the sun set. An alicorn watches her, and Rainbow dreams of the day when she'll join her in her evening flight.
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Silent Whisper · 1k words · 64 3 · 1.7k views

What does she feel? Does it matter? Twilight watches as she always does. The pony below, the silhouette in the sunset, walks on, oblivious to the alicorn pondering her emotions.

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PixelMoon

PixelMoon #1 · Dec 14th, 2017 · 1 · ·

More please.

Ughlee

Ughlee #2 · Dec 15th, 2017 · 3 · ·

oh god that was beautiful

TheClassyLeviathan

TheClassyLeviathan #3 · Dec 15th, 2017 · 4 · ·

Anybody else getting that tingly feeling deep in your chest? That little ache? It hurts doesn't it? Good. It's a good kind of pain.

Sudrian Engineer

Sudrian Engineer #4 · Dec 16th, 2017 · 3 · ·

I saw the title and thought of the song instantly

MidnightInkpaw

MidnightInkpaw #5 · Dec 17th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Wonderful story with an excellent cliffhanger. It isn't an intense one but it does leave us wondering what might happen if the story was continued.

Very cute, very poetic. I loved it.

Stormgnome

Stormgnome #6 · Dec 19th, 2017 · 2 · ·

Very nice work on this.

Lavender_Raindrops

Lavender_Raindrops #7 · Jan 9th, 2018 · 5 · ·

Please write more. This is so beautiful.

Ghostrama13

Ghostrama13 #8 · Mar 15th, 2018 · · ·

Your a romantic... please write more this tugged at my heart strings

Aweirdassguy

Aweirdassguy #9 · Mar 24th, 2018 · 3 · ·

Reading this gives me a strange feeling. It’s almost happy, but with a tinge of sadness, and even a tiny aching pain right above my heart. It’s not a bad feeling, just a new one. I don’t know what to think about it, but it’s definitely earned you a like, I’m considering a favorite too.

Zaten the Changeling