Having grown bored of the repetition in her daily life at court Celestia decides to slip out in secret during her lunch breaks to explore her kingdom. What started out as a quest to get sweets quickly turns into a first date with Big Mac.
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Fascinating idea with Celestia's spell. Well written in showing a fun-loving and moderately mischievous, but undeniably lonely, side of her character. I'm not sure how Big Mac's role will go, but you have intrigued me. I shall follow this story.
Great first chapter!
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Thanks a bunch! Love any and all feedback.
Hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well.
A rare ship I spy, one that I adore. Look forward to more
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Tell me about it. Couldn’t find fan art for this ship to save myself. Just glad someone else appreciates this pairing too. Also nice rhyme.
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Maclestia only has that one pop up, and at least catalogued there are ten fics with the ship. Wait I rhymed?
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Yay! I can now save myself.
You've caught my eye.
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So do you want me to give it back? Seeing with one eye can't be easy...
Love the chapter can't wait for the next one
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Good story so far, can't wait to see how their date turns out
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Thanks!
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Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Hope to have it out soon.
damn, you go grill
Don't see too many Mac/Celestia stories out there. This one has caught my interest. Could use a proofreader to sift out the typos, but otherwise good job!
Dreadnought
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It is a rare ship to see sailing. Glad people like it.
As for the typos I'll try my best to catch those in the future. Don't have a proofreader yet.
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Well, if your chapters are in the 1-2K range, I'd be happy to take a look at them before they are published.
Dreadnought
Glad to see this fic is still going strong. I love Celestia/Mac tics, they get to explore the whole star crossed lovers thing.
Anyways, keep it up and hope to see more soon!!
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Thanks for the offer for proofreading. I'd love to have someone to help catch typos and such. How should I go about sending the unpublished chapters to you so that you can look them over?
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Most people on this site use Google DocsTM and just send the hyperlink in a PM.
Dreadnought
This is awesome. This along with LunaMac is my favorite pairing ever! I can't wait to see more. Please keep up the awesome work!
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Glad to hear you like it. Funnily enough this story started off as a LunaMac ship.
cute
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Thanks.
Looks good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ooh the hype is building
Huh, this is going pretty well so far. Can't wait to see the next part! Please keep up the great work!
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Considering how far off the path this two chapter long short story was planned to be I'm glad its going well so far.
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Hope that build up and wait is worth it.
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Please don't feed the Molestia any dirty thoughts. The story's rating can't handle her glorious presences.
#FeedMolestia
Finally got a chance to get up to speed. Good job. Looking forward to the next installment.
Dreadnought
I feel the moment Celestia is about to seal the deal, Molestia is gonna spring up and take over
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Shhh. Don't Spoil things I've yet to write.