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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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This sucks. Have an upvote!

Fuck me.

Four of four.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Wait. Shit.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That was fucking brilliant.

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Good sec good succ

So good...sigh but in the end still not what im looking for. But Ill give you an upvote

Why just why......

Seriously? I was kind of hoping for some you and me time,

Shining, you're a dummy

we both know that you've secretly got a thing for books

Shining x Twilight incoming

nothing was fast enough to make up for him already being late

I dunno dude, maybe if you had just started off by teleporting. Then again, you are a dummy.

if he hadn't wanted to rut something before, her really did now

Definitely incoming

Nice job. I'm so curious as to who you are, I feel like Skeeter gave us a hint, but still...
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sex ideas sometimes , right

Delete space before comma

and as always the Crystal Guards

as always, the

five, fuck." He mouthed

fuck," he mouthed

know I do..." taking a timid

I'm pretty sure "Taking a timid" starts a new sentence, so capitalize it

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I know right? Seems almost like some kind of conspi- *is choked from behind*

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Can't tell if fetish or should be saving right now...

i cant tell if this is a form of masturbation or incest

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You'll never know. :trollestia:

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What is the end you're looking for?

Comment posted by TheClassyLeviathan deleted Dec 14th, 2017

Would it be wrong to say i'd like to fuck myself, if it was this enjoyable? :ajsmug:

Well damn, you wrote what I gave a different writer as a request, only with the use of Chrysalis :p

Oh come on! Selfcest doesn't have to have anything to do with narcissism.

...Although I suppose there isn't a anything wrong(er) about it if it does, now does it?

I'm not sure. 😟

Y'all are some sick motherfuckers, I mean consensual married sex?
I'm calling the police.

DumbDog
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Man, what a great title. I wish I could come up with such great titles.

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Incest is a fav of mine. Selfcest? Amazing! Shining Armor selfcest? You done fuckin' killed me good sir.
Aaaaa this was woooooooooonderful, I fucking love it, good show, good show!

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Not wrong, just really sad.😂

"Fuck Yourself"

"Pussy for Pastries"

I fucking love these story titles, dude.

Nice mate.
BTW, Whats the full of that cover art? Style seems familiar, can't name the artist

Since when is narcissism a kink?

I'd love to see more of Shining as Gleaming. Specially if Caddy decided to get into the fun in a long and hard way :ajsmug:

your fic shares a title with an awesome Steve Vai song.

Kinky. Me likes.

Though now I kinda wanna see Shining, as Gleaming, being double teamed by Shiny!Chryssie and Stallion!Cadance.

This whole thing was so awesome i kept expecting "Djent Metal, of the Pony Gods of Metal!", to explode onto the scene from of a lightning bolt, announcing himself with a thunderous electric guitar riff before challenging Shining and Cadance to explain what awesomeness was done that could summon him against his will with such potency into the material plane. :scootangel:

i can imagine a comedy sex series like this, where new divine encounters happen like this every chapter whenever shining and cadance and chrysalis fuck, accidentally forcing them to have sex less and less often as they acknowledge they have to space out sexytimes to recover between periods of intense training caused-by/in-preparation-for the stresses of the inevitable semi-random divine challengers summoned by the culmination of shining-cadance-chrysalis sexytimes. :rainbowdetermined2:

this would allow for a great epilogue scene where a young Flurry Heart sneaks into her parents bedroom one sexy night and leaves with the impression that all great sex is supposed to involve or end with power-axes and spell-slinging. :rainbowkiss:

That is how awesomely i think of this story! :moustache:

Two questions:
1. Would this be incest or masturbation?
2. If he had knocked her up would that child be a clone?

MOW

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Actually, 2. No, unless all his chromosomes are identical pairs (with the obvious exception).

Damn, 5000 words of just porn. That's more than i'd ever be able to write.

there needs to be more fics with narcissism as a description tag lololol....

So like, rereading, and it's still fantastic, but then

slowing down whenever his moans began to sound more pronounced.

her moans (since Cadance is being fucked right now?)


Damn, your old stories still hold up dude. Good shit

Fucking hot. That's one great relationship Shiny has.

"Yes, Shining," Cadance replied, walking in and out of the room with a duster in her aura as she tidied up the place. Unfortunately for Shining, that duster didn't come with a maid's outfit.

At least not during the day. During the night though...

"Well, at least I'll be able to tell you apart," Shining smirked.

This time, Shining. This time...

"Mmm, I can't decide whether it's an improvement," Chrysalis said, rising from her seat and beginning to inspect Shining's new body

Cadance: "Think about it: Now you can finally use him as your personal broodmare!"

Cadance sighed, looking back at him, "You never could follow simple instructions, could you? So rebellious."

Consider this an excuse to give him an intense training in pleasing and serving mares!


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

Maybe one day Cadance will cast this 'special spell' on herself...
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