Shameless Feelfic #3487 Starring Derpy the Talking Horse
There's a silly little pony named Derpy who needs a friend. You, ®The Only Human in Equestria™, are eager to fill this position. Second person, overly feely, emotionally manipulative, wish fulfillment nonsense. Served up hot and with a smile, just the way you like it.
Special thanks to anon for preliminary feedback and help with the title, as always.
I like it, using short sentences makes it easy to read.
Pinkie where
This story gave me feels...
I it!
So simple and cute.
This is simply cute and sweet, nothing more, nothing less, I like it.
love the stories I play this in my head and I love it even more and hope you make more
945712
Pinkie next. Patience.
And I'm glad you liked it. I really wasn't sure about this one.
good story very enjoyable. more for the future?
1089577
I'm working on a Pinkie waifufic at the moment.
Twenty tons of daaaawwww and a dumptruck full of Moe. Sweeter than a lifetime supply of Sugarcube Corner's finest. I'll take it!
must read but have to work going to favourite and read after.
1089905(edited) dude i want more please. its just awesome keep it up
Semper Fidelis
Very cute. I enjoyed it.
Kept switching from people/pony during the narration and Derpy's dialogue but it's trivial at best. Like I said, I d'awwwwed heavily.